The Human's Wish
I long for fangs and fur
for sharp claws and swifter legs
to run free in the night
To fight and win
Or just to fight
A need for strength
for the taste of blood
The sweet ache
of changing bones
The feel of rough hairs
across my skin
for nights loving enbrace
i want this change
i need this change
The feel of not belonging
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Besides some capitalization errors, I think it's a good poem
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it sound almost like a verse in a Celtic song. maybe see if you like song writing.
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