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#1 2008-11-22 22:57:57

LoupGarouAngel
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It Will Never Be

It Will Never Be

Snowflakes glitter as they dance in the moonbeams
I glide as a white wolf through the forest, a ghost in the night
Puffs of air surround my face, my fur wards of the cold
I sit alone, eyes searching sadly
I want a mate, I want it to be him, but I know that can never be
I dream of him being like me, of us running through the woods
But I know it can never be
I raise my muzzle and sing my sorrowful song to the night
Off in the distance, maybe he can hear me calling for him
Maybe he thinks about me to, about what it would be like to be like me
The howl fades into the night
I know he doesn’t know about me, I know he doesn’t think of me, and never will
I can only wish, can only dream, can watch from afar and hope the feelings fade
I turn to the moon and thank her for her gift, because it makes forgetting that much easier
With that, I fade into the night… along with my love


"You're like one of those lab rats that hits the pleasure button instead of the food until it dies!" Sam-Houses of the Holy.
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#2 2008-11-23 00:47:10

punxnotdead
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Re: It Will Never Be

Awe, that's such a nice poem - so emotionfull, too. I'm so glad to see you back writing again, it's been a bummer without you. Though this poem definately makes up for it wink
The structure is nice, as is the wording. Overall, a beautiful, vivid poem smile


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#3 2008-11-23 11:12:29

LoupGarouAngel
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Re: It Will Never Be

Thanks Punx! I wrote this when I was down, thinkin' bout friends and life, always a good poetic mood!
big_smile


"You're like one of those lab rats that hits the pleasure button instead of the food until it dies!" Sam-Houses of the Holy.
"Dude, you Fugly." Dean-Scarecrow.
A therian who's a wanna be screenwriter, but doesn't have a life story that fits the bill...
http://loupgarouangel.deviantart.com/

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#4 2008-11-23 12:25:18

Goldie
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Re: It Will Never Be

wow, i really liked it, reminded me of the friends i haven't seen since i was in 3rd grade, too long. smile


how can never ever be ever if never ever was ever, ever?
yes, i said that, but what do i mean, I'm what was that, thats crazy, crazy go nuts, nutty nuts. ok i guess I'm done, but it will never be over, now will it????????

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#5 2008-11-23 21:48:02

punxnotdead
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Re: It Will Never Be

LoupGarouAngel wrote:

Thanks Punx! I wrote this when I was down, thinkin' bout friends and life, always a good poetic mood!
big_smile

I usually get my inspiration late at night - usually 2am, and that seems the only time.


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#6 2008-11-26 09:37:29

Umbrifer
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Re: It Will Never Be

hmmm I love it^^


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#7 2008-11-26 12:18:05

WritingWulf
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Re: It Will Never Be

Really good poem for remembering things/people and pasts. I like it, very good Loup, like usuall

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