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#1 2008-12-18 13:18:49

Riek Darmani
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The feeling.

How I feel when it happens.


"....shaking, howling, yearning. Get away from the city, run naked through the woods."

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#2 2008-12-18 13:20:14

Riek Darmani
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Re: The feeling.

He feels the pain of splitting skin
The rage that bursts out from within
The rage that courses through his veins
Through which he channels all his pain
The hunter, released from ancient bonds
Tastes the blood for which he longs
Friends, family, they all mean naught
This life is new, with danger fraught
Gaia, the Earth Mother, blesses them all
In return they answer her call
A call to arms, defeat the Worms
To succeed there is much to learn
Control the anger, harness the rage
The ancient force, the curse of ages
So now he welcomes the rage within
This rage, once bidden, beneath his skin.


"....shaking, howling, yearning. Get away from the city, run naked through the woods."

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#3 2008-12-18 14:25:45

punxnotdead
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Re: The feeling.

Ooo, very intriguing poem, Riek. It flows quite nicely and the rhymes make the rythem so much better. Though it was short, it portrayed everything nicely.
Great job and welcome to the Cafe smile


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#4 2008-12-20 13:10:22

Goldie
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Re: The feeling.

Hmm, interesting. Lovely poem. big_smile


how can never ever be ever if never ever was ever, ever?
yes, i said that, but what do i mean, I'm what was that, thats crazy, crazy go nuts, nutty nuts. ok i guess I'm done, but it will never be over, now will it????????

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#5 2009-02-05 14:17:46

Riek Darmani
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Re: The feeling.

Thanks for the critisism.


"....shaking, howling, yearning. Get away from the city, run naked through the woods."

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