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#1 2008-12-29 17:29:01

WritingWulf
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From: Wisconsin
Registered: 2007-11-16
Posts: 5645

The Drive

That feeling deep within
When your held down by your own kin
Accused over and over again for false sin
Your life thrown into the bin

The fire that burns under
Your kicked in the wound so you can't even mutter
Hope becomes blurred as a feather can flutter
They look into your eyes and see an ember

The world shakes under your eyes
Yelling voices and expectations buzz like flies
You see now all the lies
Holding it in, breathing for calm until you hear just one more sigh...

Then it's the drive you feel right there
Where you can't think and thrash without care
All that anger and fear comes out from it's lair
You've done all you could to bare

You stand tired and shattered
Your false hope and dreams clatter

Shivering in confusion and seeking air
You look to the moon, to become a pair
Mother Moon shines down upon your dare
Your act to even actions and make them fair

No longer will child of the earth be wronged
Standing tall and strong with teeth sharp and long
Muzzle to the air you erupt with an ancient song

That was the Drive
The ability to Thrive
To Dive
To Survive
It's why you will stay Alive

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#2 2008-12-30 02:00:19

punxnotdead
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From: Canada...eh?
Registered: 2006-05-09
Posts: 11300

Re: The Drive

Wow....
Great poem, Writing smile *Hugs* I love the rythem, it flowed like liquid gold. I honestly envy your ability to write both poetry and stories. Unfortuntely, I'm not too good at poetry.
Oh, and I've gotta say, this line was superbly delivered; Hope becomes blurred as a feather can flutter
Very nice visual imagery there, Writing smile
10 thumbs up smile


I'm an aspiring bodybuilder! smile
"Be yourself to be free." - The Unseen
I <3 SMALLVILLE!!!

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#3 2008-12-30 03:33:25

WritingWulf
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From: Wisconsin
Registered: 2007-11-16
Posts: 5645

Re: The Drive

punxnotdead wrote:

Wow....
Great poem, Writing smile *Hugs* I love the rythem, it flowed like liquid gold. I honestly envy your ability to write both poetry and stories. Unfortuntely, I'm not too good at poetry.
Oh, and I've gotta say, this line was superbly delivered; Hope becomes blurred as a feather can flutter
Very nice visual imagery there, Writing smile
10 thumbs up smile

Awww, your flattery will only get you some of my home cooked food Punx...but that should be taken as a threat rather then praise, I suck at cooking.

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#4 2008-12-30 04:07:14

punxnotdead
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From: Canada...eh?
Registered: 2006-05-09
Posts: 11300

Re: The Drive

WritingWulf wrote:

punxnotdead wrote:

Wow....
Great poem, Writing smile *Hugs* I love the rythem, it flowed like liquid gold. I honestly envy your ability to write both poetry and stories. Unfortuntely, I'm not too good at poetry.
Oh, and I've gotta say, this line was superbly delivered; Hope becomes blurred as a feather can flutter
Very nice visual imagery there, Writing smile
10 thumbs up smile

Awww, your flattery will only get you some of my home cooked food Punx...but that should be taken as a threat rather then praise, I suck at cooking.

lol No problem-o wink I'm sure you're a far better cook than me.
Guess what I eat when I don't know what to cook (since I'm a health nut (that loooovesss chocolate))? I eat tuna burgers, with a hint of lime, carrot, and whole wheat crackers tongue Mmmmmmm, sound deliscous?


I'm an aspiring bodybuilder! smile
"Be yourself to be free." - The Unseen
I <3 SMALLVILLE!!!

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#5 2009-01-01 15:51:34

Goldie
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From: Algonquin, Someplace
Registered: 2008-05-04
Posts: 209

Re: The Drive

ooo, a home cooked meal. tongue lol hey great poem. it really is fluid.


how can never ever be ever if never ever was ever, ever?
yes, i said that, but what do i mean, I'm what was that, thats crazy, crazy go nuts, nutty nuts. ok i guess I'm done, but it will never be over, now will it????????

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#6 2009-01-01 19:09:23

WritingWulf
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From: Wisconsin
Registered: 2007-11-16
Posts: 5645

Re: The Drive

Thank you Goldie

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