Put some of your own thoughts of the night.. :3
When the moon shines,
Throw back your head and sing.
Sing our song.
Dance with the power it takes to kill,
Dance with the our pack.
Respire with the will its takes to take blood, break bones.
Lick of any remorse of being what we are from your lips.
Break free of your faux human makeup
Show the real beauty of what lies in the shadows, what cries in the dark.
What loveliness feeling earth beneath your feet
Taste the air, bask in the moon.
When the moon shines, throw back your head
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Hey, the poem isn't too bad. There were some spelling errors, but with some proofreading I think it would make a good poem
Very enjoyable
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Perfect language for a poem, not too flowery, not too blunt. Just right for wolves. And, I'm in agreement with Punx n.n
Although I'm not really one to critique literature...
o.o;
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