Yeah it has been posted. Now just to read it.  By the way I love the title.

Last edited by Vindicator (2009-05-18 22:21:35)

Ah, I'm so glad you like it! To be honest, just hearing you say that made the whole thing worth while. I can't wait to come up with the next installment! BTW, any of your drawings would be more than welcomed, I'd love to see what you could come up with.

Oh no, don't worry I don't find it personal or bothersome at all. I am a Christian, both  Methodist and Baptist in my raising (although denomination divisions always seemed so trivial to me). I would ask the same of you, but I believe I did uncover that answer during all my searching this morning! Dang, I still have no idea where you are!

Or just 80's spoof movies...

So you say you're majoring in anthropology... I have a feeling that you should at least be minoring in drawing, photography, or film production. Looking at the frames (and knowing the story of course), I feel like I'm looking through the storyboard of some big movie or something. You told me you had doubts about you drawing abilities for this, well, I am here to alleviate those fears. These drawings are absolutely exceptional. The amount of detail, the time I can imagine, is unbelievable. I can really tell you put 100% into this! I would only be blessed if you decide to continue. Man, you are good!

In all honesty, it is YOU who have made MY day today.

Thanks so much NH! I'm really putting a lot of time into this because the plot has really drawn my imagination. In fact, right now I am about halfway done with the second chapter which has plenty of surprises in store. If you haven't already, be sure to check out Vin's drawings above, they're very good. It's nice meeting you BTW!

cslucifer wrote:

What can I say- you were slow. I was just going to write "you should post a link"... but well, I figured that I might as well post a link myself.

Actually if you look above it is already there, long ago this morning.

Ok, well I'm in a rush so I can't really write a lot now, but here is Part A of Chapter 2!!! Yeah, it was getting to be a bit long, so I decided to cut in half. Hope you enjoy and please let me know what you think!

http://flwhitewolf.deviantart.com/art/V … -125938767

Last edited by White Wolf (2009-06-14 18:45:04)

Hahahahaha, thanks. That scene is actually my favorite so far. Haha, obviously as I've said before, I've got everything planned out, but that doesn't include little details, so when I write, I actually daydream at the same time. Basically, I'm watching these images in my mind and trying to describe them the best that I can, so I still do have room for inspiration. The scene with the little girl making Peter speak was something that I could just see happening, and I thought it was so funny. As for the coat of arms and motto, I had to do a lot of research there, but it's one of the major reasons why I chose his surname. I'm really excited about the conclusion of this chapter,  it's going to be pretty intense.

I'll be back in an hour, till then here's something that I hope will keep you thoroughly occupied, the conclusion of chapter 2! Enjoy!

http://flwhitewolf.deviantart.com/art/V … -125938767

Last edited by White Wolf (2009-06-14 18:45:26)

Thanks you two! Yeah, I was really thrilled that I got it done so quick. (I wrote the entire thing today) It was a lot quicker than the first half which was so intensive on details and flashbacks. Boy was that a long chapter! Hahaha, in retrospect, I probably should have split it, but I didn't want to since I had already come up with all the chapter plots, etc. On paper it sounded easy, but once I started writing, I realized that it was such a critical chapter that I really needed to give it the attention it deserved. I'm really, really excited about the next one too! It's going to be really action packed, lots of emotion, so I know it'll be a quick one to write as well. Anyways, really glad you're enjoying it, and I'm enjoying writing it just as much!

Thanks so much! Yeah, it's really weird. Till now, my favorite story I've been working on is a novel that I've been periodically writing for two years (its about 25 pages long right now), about a fugitive in the South in the 1800's. Anyways, that one I know how it's going to end, but everything else is unplanned and I've really enjoyed seeing where it's taken me. I must say though, that this one has been the most fun to write frankly. I think the reason I planned it so much was because I daydreamed it all, and thus I just had to write it out and "color" it. Thanks for the compliments too.