The Werewolf Café / The Eternal Redemption of the White Wolf

White Wolf · 2009-06-03 00:15:53

Oooo cool, I look forward to seeing it when it's finished! Uh yes.... hmmmm, I'm trying to think on how to describe it...

Vindicator · 2009-06-03 00:33:05

Any details would be good and I can try to implement them to the best of my ability.

White Wolf · 2009-06-03 00:39:42

Ok, well the best I can describe it... It's not too big, probably about an inch or less long, hanging from a black leather necklace. The cross itself has a "guard" (like that on a sword, except at the end of the point) on the top part and the two sides. The bottom is slightly tapered.

Vindicator · 2009-06-03 00:44:52

Thanks, I'll see what I can do with that.

Vindicator · 2009-06-04 21:48:16

Well Here be more Illustrations for your wonderful tale.

http://hyper-aggie42.deviantart.com/art … -124829331

White Wolf · 2009-06-04 22:09:44

Hahahahahaha, perfect! I love the artwork you've done for the story! It's awesome! Hahahahahaha, maybe we can get it published as a book with your illustrations! Thanks Vin, it's awesome!

Vindicator · 2009-06-04 22:12:16

Your Very Welcome My Friend. Now you know why I'm covered in pencil lead. I how stressful art is when I do it for others, but it is so much fun. I'm glad your enjoying them.

White Wolf · 2009-06-04 22:16:47

Hahahahaha, I was wondering... I really love it, because I feel as if it gives a vision to my ideas, it really helps to reaffirm things in my mind and it adds a little bit of something to the storyline as well.

Vindicator · 2009-06-04 22:18:22

Fantastic! I really enjoy it and it gives Cause for me to do "RESEARCH!"

White Wolf · 2009-06-04 22:19:47

Hahahahahahaha

Vindicator · 2009-06-04 22:22:20

I love the way you write as well, it makes picturing it very easy, and then drawing it is almost a snap. Also in the role play when you were evil that was intensive detail. I can't wait to read more of what you have written.

White Wolf · 2009-06-04 22:27:43

Hahahahaha, yeah, I'm about half way done with the next chapter. I wrote it all in one day about a week ago, and then haven't had time since. I'm hoping to have it done sometime next week though. Personally, I think it'll be the best installment yet.

Vindicator · 2009-06-04 22:34:10

Fantastic! That reminds me that I haven't begun to write the end of my tale yet. Oops. *Sneaks away before I can get mauled by who ever has been waiting for it.*

White Wolf · 2009-06-04 22:38:30

*sharpens claws...

Vindicator · 2009-06-04 22:42:33

Oh Look there goes a page now. *Points behind CS and White.* See ya! *Runs the other way.*

BTW White, I didn't know you had even opened up Permutation.

White Wolf · 2009-06-04 22:47:06

I haven't, but that's not to say that I'm not going to, and it'd be better be finished when I read it.

Vindicator · 2009-06-04 22:49:27

Oh, OK, well it is near completion as in length with all the plot laid out, but it is always in a constant flux of editing.

Vindicator · 2009-06-04 22:50:02

cslucifer wrote:
Sorry, not buying that again!

*Runs after V- tackling him*

*Places a "comfy chair" on top o him*

Not so comfy now, hu?

"mmmmmmmm mmmm mmm m"

Vindicator · 2009-06-05 00:24:15

Wow, CS.

Vindicator · 2009-06-05 00:35:28

Not tonight.

wolfblood17 · 2009-06-06 16:06:10

I liked the were-panthers toying with Peter. I do want to ask though: Why is Peter running around on four legs and the were-cats on two? Is it to make a harder, more dangerous enemy?
Also, this little writing war among the three of you is a little strange. Entertaining, yet strange....

Last edited by wolfblood17 (2009-06-06 16:25:04)

White Wolf · 2009-06-06 23:07:47

Hahahahaha, I'm not quite sure about the "fight" either...

Well, my reasoning behind this is that Peter is not quite experienced with his abilities yet. Whereas the were-panthers have obviously mastered their form for quite sometime, Peter still is resisting the change and is still determining where the balance is between his wolf side and his human side. Thus, he continues to run upright (I think you meant to say that, but just flipped it around) while the were-cats follow behind with a much more natural stride on all fours. Lucky for Peter, he has the stamina to escape (while the cats, as is the case with actual large cats, are much more developed for the sprint).

I'm really glad that you are enjoying my story so far, and I am honored with any questions that you have! (It makes me think more about it too!) BTW, it's very nice to meet you wolfblood!

wolfblood17 · 2009-06-07 08:57:26

Nice too meet you too. You have subtle violence in your story, I like it. Also a lot of suspense. Me, if you've seen my story, I'm much more upfront and in-the-face with blood, gore, and language. Of course, with this being an almost-comic you don't have to put extremely graphic words. With mine being a full story, I have to use that. You know: Paint a picture (bloody in my case...), don't say it; or something like that. If you have read my story, what do you think about it?

White Wolf · 2009-06-08 19:30:35

Thanks! I took the time and read your first two chapter today, I really like it! You do a great job of using description in your story, I'm quite interested to see where it's going, but I haven't had the time yet to read the 3rd chapter. I do like your take on the whole werewolf family thing though, quite interesting...

wolfblood17 · 2009-06-09 12:21:09

Those are actually just parts of the first chapter because its so long. I don't really get into the whole detail on whats happening later until the beginning of chapter 2. I expect myself to be done with the first chapter today. I'm writing it Microsoft Word, and its 13 pages for chapter 1 so far. Oh yeah and thanks for liking the descriptions. I think its one of the bloodiest werewolf story ever written.

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