!!! Hahahahahaha, I'm excited!!!! Thanks so much for the words too, I think you'll really, really like the conclusion of the volume. The next volume will be interesting too whenever I start with it. Let's just say that Peter really has to come face to face with himself and who he's becoming.

*Sits down waiting.* You did say today for the next, right?

Ah, yes that makes sense, you actually look over yours. I just get to excited and through mine up then edit later. Well I shall wait, my friend for your amazing tale.

(The torment, the agony, the...........repression, the pre readers distress, the..... (I could go on.) )

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Hahahahahaha, OH MY GOSH, I have two fans!!!! *Quickly loses the devious attitude and prepares some iced tea and lemonade for his guests.

Hahahahaha, ewwwwww. I actually hate sweet tea, I'm much more of an unsweet person. >

The final chapter in Volume I!!!!!! Hope you enjoy! The title of Volume II is found at the end.

BTW, I'll be on tonight sometime between 9-10 PT through till whenever we all go to bed. Also, remind me that I have a great wolf dream to tell you from last night.

Devouring the words as we speak.

Wow.....that took my breath away. Fantastic Writing White!   I am so torn about what I think of the main character. He has definitely begun a decent into darkness, one that seems justified, and yet it appears so wrong. I feel exhilaration and terrible sadness for what is happening. The whole thing was brilliant! I was not expecting the end outcome at all. Such an amazing way with words, my friend. I wish I could write like that. It is YOU who needs to publish, not I. Just Wow! I still can't believe what happened, such detailed words, such powerful words. My mind raced through it, as if I was actually seeing it. Amazing!

Wow, that is a complement. I love your ability to work with a character and make them dynamic as you say. I find my characters to be quite flat and easily predictable, yours I deduct one thing and they turn around and do another. I found the massacre to be very interesting indeed. Lest see predictions, well based on the title, I would say Egyptian mythology involved. You do love Egypt. Also my guess is that Peter as he isn't like the others maybe a sort of Anubis himself, interesting as he is trying to fight for good, but falling upon so much death by his very hands, becoming that what he swore to destroy. I can very much see him loosing control and heading for non violators, and thus continuing a decent, which will be fascinating to see, but also quite saddening to watch.

Hahaha! Well then let the game of deduction begin, lets see if this curve of yours is really unpredictable. I look forward to reading more of your tale, my friend.

Hahah. Like I said I can't wait. Also I find it Ironic that my next chapter will blow any prediction you have about the villain to dust.

To answer the first, nope I just have an outline for the end. I'm going to type it up tomorrow, maybe even both chapters. As for my characters who knows....