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#1 2009-06-25 00:30:51
sosciety (poem)
Trapped, in sosciety watched by eyes unseen, a new fear instilled within us, stuck, as the world wants to see us. They fear change, as we embrace it, soscieties wall of its own perfection, our desire to change, their fear, unleashes its shear stupidity. The one difference that holds us, we have souls as well as them, we only have different blood, we, scared to show ourselves to the sosciety of man, because of unseen superstition in the eyes that behold us. Sosciety.
Why must all humans fear what they do not understand, why must they fear us, instead of try to understand us and accept our existance. (Gavin aka Lycankid)
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#2 2009-06-25 00:35:10
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hope you guys liked it, that was my first attempt at poetry please comment!!
Why must all humans fear what they do not understand, why must they fear us, instead of try to understand us and accept our existance. (Gavin aka Lycankid)
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#3 2009-06-25 07:11:56
- wolfblood17
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Quite good! I agree with you and the poem, humans fear the unknown, so they feel they must destroy it or avoid it. Especially against werewolves, they don't even believe that they exist.
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#4 2009-06-26 02:29:50
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that was what that meant exactly! wow your depiction is very good! i think ill keep writing then ok, blue moon inspired me to write a poem when i read "caged"
Why must all humans fear what they do not understand, why must they fear us, instead of try to understand us and accept our existance. (Gavin aka Lycankid)
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#5 2009-06-26 06:45:42
- wolfblood17
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Figures, her poem does have a lot of meaning to. Everyone feels trapped I guess when the same thing happens everyday, when nothing changes for a while. That is why werewolves are never bored, they CHANGE!!!!!! 
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#7 2009-06-27 09:46:40
- Bluemoon
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Nice poem, like wolfblood, I agree with you. Humans dont know about werewolves so they want to destroy or act like they dont exist.
I'm glad i could inspire you to write a poem.
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Know how to wield a weapon, then your a survivalist.
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#8 2009-06-27 10:53:32
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glad you read mine! im ignored by most people, must be the sharp teeth lol
Why must all humans fear what they do not understand, why must they fear us, instead of try to understand us and accept our existance. (Gavin aka Lycankid)
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