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Chapter 5

Luna awoke in her room, human again; lying next to her was Kinler, he too was human again, and just as handsome, he was also naked, as the sheets shifted she knew she was too. “Wake up you fur ball!� Jumping at her voice Kinler landed on his feet. “What’s happening? What’s wrong?� “Nothing… nothings wrong, I was just wondering if we… you know … last night? Luna answered. Looking down and realizing what she had meant Kinler first covered himself then blushed, “Uh no we did not, I would explain how I know this but it’s not the time for that,� “Ok, so what are we doing today?� obviously thankful for the change in subject, the black haired boy sighed, “We start for your kingdom, it’s time you start your pack,� “My what? You never said anything about a pack, what is that exactly?� Luna asked unsure of what lay ahead.
The woods passed slowly by as the couple walked through the trees, Kinler had taken the time to explain everything as they prepared to leave, now on the trail Luna felt confident, on top of everything that had happened in the last few days, “Ok so we’re just gonna walk to the north collecting people as we stop in towns and cities?� asking to reassure what she had learned, “Only if they want to follow you,� Kinler answered with a glance over his shoulder.
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That’s how they went about it, spending weeks or months in a city but always moving on to another, the pack slowly grew with time five new wolves, three humans, and a draconian. The Beta, Nathan a dark grey furred wolf with knowledgeable patience, the delta is Derrick, short tempered and not very strong, both of them brought their mates Jessica, and Autumn, final of the wolves is Fang, with a calm nature, tall stance, and harsh blue eyes that made you feel dead, he could have easily been a leader, he also had one other difference, the pure white wings that never left his back. The humans James, Tori, and Lily all refused to be turned but wanted the adventure ahead, tagging along as cooks and friends, and finally the draconian, vampire if you prefer, Ruka, she joined the group when her family broke their vow and flooded a city with death and blood, when she refused to participate she was banished from her castle and forced to leave.
Now closer then ever to the Arctic palace the party picked up pace covering twice the daily distance, until coming upon an ice covered Polaria, the northern city. “Amazing, I’ve never seen this much ice in an entire winter, it’s unbelievable,� Nathan exclaimed before sinking to his neck in lose snow, “And I’ve never seen a wolf sink into snow but what do ya know, it’s possible,� Ruka laughed before pulling the grey haired boy from the snow and setting him on the ground, “thanks for that, don’t suppose fang over there would have helped me,� Nathan muttered to Ruka, face turning about as red as her dress. At hearing his name fang looked over and growled, even in his human form the threat was obvious, seeing Ruka he allowed a small grin to cross his face, and before Nathan knew anything a flurry of snow exploded around him as both Ruka and Fang took flight and soared above his head and back towards camp. Luna looked up at the sound of wings, Fang and Ruka appeared above the trees and landed calmly in the camp seconds later Nathan rushed from the trees and pulled to a stop beside the other two, glancing around for Kinler as she walked towards the patrol he too walked the same course. “Anything to report?� both alphas asked simultaneously, they looked at each other and smiled before looking back for the answer to their question, “the city is ahead we can reach it within a few minutes, the buildings are frozen over but movement behind the gate was obvious,� Ruka reported then glancing at Nathan added, “also the snow is deep but soft, you will need to watch your step.� “Hey! Dinner’s ready, call the others please!� ears perked at Lilies voice, moments later fang let out a deep howl that cut through the air, as silence began to set again the three other wolves slipped from the shadows and headed for the tents. As the pack entered the ring of tents Tori and Lily stepped from the largest that was the kitchen carrying a pot of stew between the two of them, “Smells great, you guys are awesome,� Derrick cheered them on, but slowly a look of concern crossed his face, “Umm…. Who cooked?� Grinning at each other the two girls laughed, “We did, James just diced things up for us, there’s no need to worry,�
In the past the wolves have had a few problems with James’s cooking, a couple meals gone wrong and now the only meal he prepares is a blood donation for Ruka, the very thought of his cooking makes all canine hybrids cringe. As they grabbed their food the couples separated, Luna and Kinler to their tent, Nathan and Autumn sat on a log at the edge of the clearing, Derrick and Jessica to the fire, James and Tori retreated to the kitchen tent, Ruka took a short flight to sit in the large pine in the center of the clearing, finally if was just Fang and Lily rationing their food into their respective bowls and found a place to sit, Fang  jumped into the tree to join Ruka and Lily settled on the stump protruding from the snow. “…. llowing me?â€� fang shook his head to clear his thoughts, “I’m sorry please repeat that,â€� he said still shaking his head, “Is there any specific reason you’ve been following me?â€� Ruka asked with a sigh and curious glance, “Oh… well… I’ve just had feeling that you’d need my help…â€� As the muttered words left his lips a gleam caught his eye near the base of a tree at the clearing’s edge, seconds later a flash, spray of blood, and a stabbing pain, looking at his hand raised, unconsciously, a silver bolt protruded from both sides, the point mere centimeters from Ruka’s eye. His blood covered her face and the lust for it filled her eyes, another second and Ruka tackled him launching both from the tree, struggling against Ruka’s attempts to get at his throat Fang rolled on top of the draconian just as another bolt buried itself into his side, he turned to face where the arrow had come, growling he jumped in that direction shifting as he did so, shredding the black shirt he had been wearing. Kinler hearing the commotion leapt from his tent and looked around; blood was sprayed on the ground, Fang’s shirt in pieces on the ground, and Ruka trying to find the source of the blood. The look in her eyes said she was still lusting, and only one guess at whose blood it was…, Fang flew past the trees at a dead sprint, the shooter smelled human, but he had enhancements, for one he could outrun a werewolf, and the smell was that of which he had expected, a hunter.The pain was excruciating, the bolts still protruded from his body and as the pain tore through him again it changed into anger, all feeling was gone his white fur hanging in his eyes turned black and the world’s perspective changed, every shadow seemed to give a new view, a new sent… picking his way through the trees faster than ever, coming to the end of the trees fang could see the vampire hunter but the shadows pulled him back, pulled him back and didn’t want to let go…
Luna surveyed the scene at camp, the blood in the snow, the silver bolts buried in the tree, and the strange black…. No grey… collapsed on the ground in front of her was Fang his fur changing to it normal pure white color, even more bolts in his side and hand. As his fur vanished Luna saw the bruises, the broken arm, everything.

Last edited by fangsofsorrow (2009-11-01 16:40:54)

you happy i added Ruka

is that a yes?

thanks

Ruka is a Vampire, Fang is a wolf with white fur and wings they're two different people

thats ok

NIIIIICE!  I like where this is going!

I love all of the arts...writing is my favourite though....except I can't dance...at ALL!  *shudders*
You're a good writer though, dude, keep it up!  I so need to write more...

So, do you have this story planned out?  How many chapters are you thinking?  I'm syched to read more...