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#1 2010-08-16 12:42:07

BrokenHowls
Hiding in the Mist
From: One of the alternate realities
Registered: 2009-07-18
Posts: 76

Loup-garou (poetry)

Loup-garou

Upon the chiselled stones
I see my blood
And broken bones

The faintest call escapes my lips
As claws outstretched
Rend all that rips

Blazing eyes and rancid breath
Sharp stained fangs
Most grizzly death

For fearsome beast was my last sight
A fool who wandered
The moonlight night.

I dunno, I feel like there should be more to it ... it just seems a little bare...


~The remaining puzzle piece in an already complete jigsaw~

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#2 2010-08-17 02:34:11

KidWerewolf36
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Registered: 2009-05-17
Posts: 168

Re: Loup-garou (poetry)

yeah it needs more but I like especially the last paragraph. Does he see human prey?

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