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#1 2010-08-19 12:15:15
- wolfblood17
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Serenity Through Hell
Serenity Through Hell
Deep in the well,
I found the bloody pools of Hell.
Down into darkness I fall,
Where I then try to stand tall.
In blackness I knew
There was no serenity through Hell.
I found only pain
But I try to fight.
All is in vain
Trying for the light.
As my soul and spirits drain,
There are eyes of bright.
A passage has cleared
For serenity through Hell.
Fire I must embrace
In the beauty covered with lace.
Your voice is a guide
Against the deadly pride
Of the Black Bell.
You begin to tell
My dark heart of
Serenity through Hell.
"Follow me my love,
I am the bright dove.
Where I take you
Only a few
have gone.
It's a bright land
Along the black sand
of Hell.
My love please take my hand.
So I can take you,
For serenity through Hell."
There are no angels in Hell,
You can't tell?
Is my soul not to sell
To get serenity through Hell?
"No my love, you have been found
By a soul that is sound.
It is the love by which you are bound.
Now don't fear and flinch
Take my hand and clench.
We will find you
Serenity through Hell."
SO, how do you guys like it? Love is really powerful, it can lead you through anything.
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#2 2010-08-19 13:12:21
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Re: Serenity Through Hell
this is really good, i liked the ryhme scheme, and the imagery was very good. i could actually see the "black sand of hell"
And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do
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#3 2010-08-19 13:27:26
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Thanks. Inspired by love. That's what makes the best writing or what not I think.
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#4 2010-08-19 13:33:46
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Re: Serenity Through Hell
agreed. half of my poetry on here is inspired by love.
And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do
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#5 2010-08-19 14:16:57
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Re: Serenity Through Hell
Yeah, you have good poetry by the way. So yeah.... love is very inspirational... I'm gonna write a couple of romance stories... one based off this with the most dark imagery of hell ever made.
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#6 2010-08-19 14:21:28
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thank you 
and yes it is inspirational. it can provoke a person to do many things they otherwise wouldnt do. and that sounds cool, i will read them when you post them
And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do
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#7 2010-08-19 14:22:56
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hehehe, alright thanks. You'll like them... I think I'll keep this thread as random short stuff or conversation blurbs... or poetry....
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#8 2010-08-19 14:25:02
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sounds good to me.
And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do
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#9 2010-08-19 14:32:52
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The next is REALLY DARK.... and emotional, it involves teen suicide.... (not about me though... completely random bit that would show up in my "Stationary" story in the far future..
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#10 2010-08-19 14:37:53
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that does sound very dark *pulls hood on* >>.....<<.....>>...
And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do
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#11 2010-08-19 14:47:27
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Hahahahhaha. It'll be really emotional, maybe.... so get your tissues ready.... *pulls some out of pocket for anyone not ready*
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#12 2010-08-20 01:39:23
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Oh and this poem sorta helped to bring back my missing relationship. So I'm happy now!
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#13 2010-08-20 01:50:34
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aw man! congratulations! that is great! i hope it works out for you
And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do
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#14 2010-08-20 01:52:45
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Same here! I think it will. We got back together much earlier than planned! So yeah! Something right must be happening!
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#15 2010-08-20 01:55:16
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thats good. me and my mate are really happy together as well but man fortune must have been looking at you 
And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do
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#16 2010-08-20 02:02:05
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I hope so.... Senior year is gonna be rough on both of us. But either way we're friends forever and will see each other every so often! And congrats for your mate! That's great!
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#17 2010-08-20 02:16:28
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well there are rough times in every relationship. but they are only bumps in the road ya know? yeah i am happy with my mate problem is right now she is in a different state 
And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do
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#18 2010-08-20 09:41:04
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Yeah, the bumps..... well the past doesn't matter anymore. And that sucks that your mate is in a different state.
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#19 2010-08-20 12:40:30
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thats all right, while i miss her, i know that when me and her get together it will worth it.
And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do
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#20 2010-08-20 12:52:19
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Lets hope for your sake you get to see her soon. I may not be able to see my girl all that much this year... but when college and afterwards come along. Hell yeah we're gonna see each other!
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#21 2010-08-20 12:55:32
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thanks man but i know that me and her will be together again. its just a matter of time. and thats great that you will be with your mate
And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do
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#22 2010-08-20 13:26:18
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I definitely hope I can be with my mate. She's the greatest thing to ever happen to me in my short life (so far)!
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#23 2010-08-20 13:32:27
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i hear ya. my mate has completely changed how i look at life. she is my light (yes i know that sounds corny and i dont care 
)
And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do
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#24 2010-09-04 21:44:55
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Damn I'm sorry for my late responses. I'm over my girl now, and moving on and very less-stressed in life over it! I've decided to post all of the first person sections of "A Man Named Stubbe" here..... all of them put together can make a second story all together. And it saves length to (for the site I'm showing the shortened version to, not here though, you guys get it all)!
GO WEREWOLF CAFE!
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#25 2010-09-06 12:12:45
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I'm going to send this poem to a contest! Wish me luck!
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