i did a project in school last year with poems and i realized how much i love them so i made a couple
here they are
(yes i realize these should be in the non werewolf section but i wanted them to be with other poems because i figure the people who know poems will click on this section and i want good feedback)

HOPE
Hope is what keeps us sane
through the darkness and the rain
it lights up the night
when nothing else will
it helps us to fight
but we lose still
for it is nothing but a thaught
and that is not why we faught
for the stability of tomorow
but for the pains of today
and there is nothing to shrink the sorrow
or to make the happyness stay
and when there is nothing to do but give up
the battle is half way done
it is not time to drop the cup
you must lift it nearer to the sun
for hope is what keeps us sane
but it will never take away the pain

TOMORROW
will life ever fast forward
and skip the things that hurt
or must we always look starward
lying on the dirt
while the pain digs deeper
and we get sadder
what could we attain
living life for tomorow
there is noting left to gain
but a life full of sorrow
and misery
but hopefully
tomorrow will be different
tomorrow we will see
a place not so arrogant
a place that is free

WHY NOT HELP
is there any one who knows the pain
that pain that i constantly feel
have you ever seen the stain
or fallen to kneel
for the injured and the hurt
have you ever worn the workers shirt
or are you so content with your happyness
that others don't matter
do you leave them in their sadness
or give them a silver platter
with a banquet and a life
full of purpose and no strife
do you know how much it matters
to be loved and held tight
you will never hear the splatters
or see the darkend light
if you love with all your heart
they will get a brand new start

HEART ACHE
has my heart ached enough
or must it go on
so far i've been tough
but now my strength is gone
it left me slowly
an now i am weak
becoming so sickly
i have less than a week
to prove myself worthy
of the life i've been given
but i'm not as sturdy
not as driven
it's hard not to give in
and even harder to win
but we all can survive
if we know what's at stake
we just have to strive
to stop this heart ache

CONFESSION
the tears on my cheek are growing
for it is now that i must confess
oh tears of rain keep falling
for it is now that i address
that i ws the one to start
the raging fire in my heart
ever burning
and ever dark
i am yearning
for the mark
that can never be undone
or ever shown in the sun
i see it in my dreams
just a memory
but now i know that nothing's as it seems
for every moment could mean misery
not a second can be changed
or ever re-arranged
and tears can bandage up the wounds
but they will never fully heal
so don't keep your hands bound
and tell everyone how you feel

i'm not really sure about these poems, they aren't great and they go of topic but i still like them just cause they are my first real attempts
but of course i'm biased so please tell me what YOU think, good or bad