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#1 2010-11-18 10:59:43

WolflikeCriminal
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From: Rock Bottom
Registered: 2010-11-18
Posts: 605

Future or Fate?

My mind is off in another dimension,

Releasing myself of the heat of the tension.

Senior year; what one of the best?

Completely the same as all of the rest.

Drama at school or trouble with Ma,

Is nothing like a run with the law.

No music or phone, just a paper and date,

I don’t understand, why this is my fate.

My life is no further; I have no more lies,

College won’t be seen, deep in my eyes.

What mistakes I have made, and truth to be told,

I’m scared of my future, my soul, I have sold.


Tell me im worthless,useless and pathetic. I will believe you. But in the end im the one who succeeds.

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#2 2010-11-19 14:54:57

Afflicted.Soul
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From: Fayetteville, North Carolina
Registered: 2010-11-18
Posts: 137

Re: Future or Fate?

You know...normally I hate poems like this. But the way you wrote it...is oddly beautiful. I'm not a teenage girl, but I imagine this must be what goes through the hearts and minds of others like yourself as they look back on mistakes made. =] All in all...I can relate.


Why didn't you just jump....

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