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#51 2012-06-17 05:14:00

codeman1234
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From: crossville Tn
Registered: 2011-11-15
Posts: 46

Re: Elegy to the Moon

I'm not sure I like the revision,about him being half and half, but I do like how it speaks from the characters point of view. What you should do is make the chapter the persons point of view for example Chapter 1: Rose than Chapter 2: Rodney something like that you know. but I really like it so far.


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#52 2013-07-24 23:46:49

AlphaGammaWolfie
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From: Bowie MD
Registered: 2012-02-20
Posts: 484

Re: Elegy to the Moon

Thanks for the input Codeman! Actually I have the final revision and the whole plot is more developed and the characters names have changed and its really friggen awesome. I think i should continue writing the second chapter tonight because it describes the 2nd main character.


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#53 2013-07-25 00:08:11

AlphaGammaWolfie
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From: Bowie MD
Registered: 2012-02-20
Posts: 484

Re: Elegy to the Moon

I am coming across problems that I am hoping you guys can give me some answers to. My first chapter is only three pages long but in those three pages it describes how my 1st character is developed and came to be. keep in mind that i am writing this in manuscript form so maybe three 8 by 11 pages can equal more than three book pages. I basically need help introducing my 2nd main character. Guess yall would have to read the 1st chapter before i get advice but its not complete without the 2nd main character.


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#54 2013-07-28 19:19:18

AlphaGammaWolfie
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From: Bowie MD
Registered: 2012-02-20
Posts: 484

Re: Elegy to the Moon

Hello dear friends and new friends. As you all know about my book Feral, I have finally decided on a revision that I am happy with and I am willing to share the First chapter with you to get some feedback. Enjoy!


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#55 2014-09-10 22:33:55

AlphaGammaWolfie
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From: Bowie MD
Registered: 2012-02-20
Posts: 484

Re: Elegy to the Moon

I am also writing a book that takes place in 16th century France during the musketeers and king Louie 6th. It has a similar plot as the three musketeers and a bit of time travel and a bit of divinci code. pretty coole.


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#56 2014-09-11 01:13:53

SilentStrider
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From: Michigan, Oscoda
Registered: 2008-09-10
Posts: 432

Re: Elegy to the Moon

Hiya, Alpha!  This is my first time replying to any of your posts.  I've been dormant for a while, but I always check in from time to time at the werewolf cafe.  As aspiring authors I feel we can learn a lot from one another.  If you'd like I'd be happy to read through what you have and give you some feedback.

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