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Silver mist
Silver mist,holy rain
falling lightly
o'er leathery dragon wing
calm as love
savage as death
she silently flies
o'er the land
gliding through time
flying through space
at a heavenly pace
scales glitter in the sun
eyes flitter
she's having fun
flying through the silver mist,
the holy rain.
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2
Black angels
As day
forms into night
the edges of reality fray
at the moon's light
for in the dark
black angels wait
as the sky's grey clouds spark
they are eager to taste
the flowing red wine
and so none will waste
for it is so fine
to the angels of the night.
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3
Shadowbreak.
to break the heart so beautiful,
to shatter the soul so bright,
i must have been a sight,
to stand in the night,
so alone,
so calm,
blood on my palm,
i cry a song,
for the one who walks away,
with blood on his teeth,
and a tear in his eye,
i cry,
for my gaurdian of shadow.
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there they are.
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Wow Moonfur you have some really good poems...and your obsessed with dragons XD But you defenitly have a good shot of becoming a poet!
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well thanks,and....<.< >.> most of my poems are of vampires.
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heres my new ones
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Moonlit water
in the moonlight
the water glistens,
water shines,
and glitters,
add blood there,
blood that twines
and binds,
he stares at me,
through the water,
bloody water,
and his eyes shine like rubies,
beautiful gems,
they grow softer,
and keener,
and like water,
blood flows,
into my eyes,
into my skies,
everything is red,
dead,
in dread,
of the lady and lord of madness.
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Many names
I have many names,
to which I reply,
they are here,
both far and near,
lady of mist,
lady of shadow,
lady of tourture,
I am of,
no stature,
cruel mistress,
sister of shadow,
sister of dread,
and the dead,
I have many names,
to which I reply,
do you see,who i am?
Last edited by Moonfur (2009-04-16 14:32:04)
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Lol Many Many Many Names. I Like The Black Angel One A Lot. The First One I Read, "Silver Mist". Well I Just Remembered That I Got Bored Today And Just Wrote Stuff. Came Up With "Silver Mist, Skies Of Gray, What Will Be Your Fate Today?" Now tell me that isn't original because I could of sworn I heard it from someone.
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well thx...and i made all these up from MY mind,thank you.
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I love Moonlit Water. Read aloud slowly, it calls forth the animal, the water, a whole mysterious world.
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hmm..thank you for your wonderful words,wf.i should think i will have more up soon...
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I really enjoyed the second one in the first post.
All the rest were also very good.
Keep up the poetry, and you will become a poet.
Let me know if you ever publish a book, I'll buy it.
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haha,ill look forward to that,lord hondros.yes..everyone seems to like black angels...my poems usually show my feelings.
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I cry on nothing
I feel like,
when i walk,
i am stalked,
by someone i love,
but never knew,
so painful,
so dreadful,
i lie awake,
thinking,
hoping,
that he would be there,
to share,
our love,
i feel him everywhere,
i hear him in my mind,
i see a shadow,
and turn on the light,
but nothing is there,
except night,
but then i weep,
in his lap,
and cry on his shoulder,
only to find,
that when i look,
and i weep,
the only thing i find there,
is nothing at all,
so i cry myself to sleep.
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oh,and i have no idea weather this is poem,or what,but i made the last poem from this:
i see you in my head,hear you searching,i know your watching me,i feel you,but i can't see you.those eyes of yours,ruby red they are,i hear you in my mind,see you in the night,but when i turn on the light,your only in my mind.you search my thoughts,like a,red box,i dream of you,every night,i see you in the night,you follow me,i walk warily,and when i come,back to bed,i cry and weep,and i feel you at my side,i weep in your lap,i cry on your shoulder,but in the end..all i see are my pillows..and i cry myself to sleep
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its ok..
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hmm.......i am obsessed with dragons...
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they're amazing you have a talent, exploit it
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heh,thanks.in in a poem mood....a thousand will pass my mine,yet i never write them down/
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why not?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
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because there are too many at once
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ohhhhhh
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haha
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lol
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