Wow Moonfur you have some really good poems...and your obsessed with dragons XD But you defenitly have a good shot of becoming a poet!

heres my new ones
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Moonlit water

in the moonlight
the water glistens,
water shines,
and glitters,
add blood there,
blood that twines
and binds,
he stares at me,
through the water,
bloody water,
and his eyes shine like rubies,
beautiful gems,
they grow softer,
and keener,
and like water,
blood flows,
into my eyes,
into my skies,
everything is red,
dead,
in dread,
of the lady and lord of madness.
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Many names

I have many names,
to which I reply,
they are here,
both far and near,
lady of mist,
lady of shadow,
lady of tourture,
I am of,
no stature,
cruel mistress,
sister of shadow,
sister of dread,
and the dead,
I have many names,
to which I reply,
do you see,who i am?

Last edited by Moonfur (2009-04-16 14:32:04)

well thx...and i made all these up from MY mind,thank you.

hmm..thank you for your wonderful words,wf.i should think i will have more up soon...

haha,ill look forward to that,lord hondros.yes..everyone seems to like black angels...my poems usually show my feelings.

oh,and i have no idea weather this is poem,or what,but i made the last poem from this:

i see you in my head,hear you searching,i know your watching me,i feel you,but i can't see you.those eyes of yours,ruby red they are,i hear you in my mind,see you in the night,but when i turn on the light,your only in my mind.you search my thoughts,like a,red box,i dream of you,every night,i see you in the night,you follow me,i walk warily,and when i come,back to bed,i cry and weep,and i feel you at my side,i weep in your lap,i cry on your shoulder,but in the end..all i see are my pillows..and i cry myself to sleep

hmm.......i am obsessed with dragons...

heh,thanks.in in a poem mood....a thousand will pass my mine,yet i never write them down/

because there are too many at once

haha