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#1 2009-07-05 13:07:21
- FenrirFinale
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The World
The brightest stars shine above
A gentle breeze, a new found love
All that was and will ever be
Matters less than you and me
Eternal blue, both sky and sea
Everlasting youth not meant to be.
I see a world where we are lost
Striving to live no matter the cost.
Simple desires lost in it all
A single leaf in the middle of Fall
As the wind blows gentle across your face
I see the stars glowing in space
This world of chaos means little to me
For I am floating at the bottom of the sea.
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#2 2009-07-05 13:56:18
- Moonfur
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Re: The World
I think it's wonderful.two poets?
"In the time it took for you to walk down one little hallway,I went to London,got my head blown off,and came back."-Schrodinger-Hellsing "Now lets go die like mangy dogs!"-bernadotte-hellsing "Please Mr. Bernadette,do not smoke inside me."-Seras-hellsing
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#3 2009-07-05 13:58:49
- FenrirFinale
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Re: The World
It would seem so.
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#4 2009-07-05 14:05:21
- Moonfur
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Re: The World
aye....tho i dont think mine are that good at all...
"In the time it took for you to walk down one little hallway,I went to London,got my head blown off,and came back."-Schrodinger-Hellsing "Now lets go die like mangy dogs!"-bernadotte-hellsing "Please Mr. Bernadette,do not smoke inside me."-Seras-hellsing
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#5 2009-07-05 14:05:44
- FenrirFinale
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Re: The World
I like them.
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#6 2009-07-05 14:18:33
- Moonfur
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Re: The World
of course you like them.
"In the time it took for you to walk down one little hallway,I went to London,got my head blown off,and came back."-Schrodinger-Hellsing "Now lets go die like mangy dogs!"-bernadotte-hellsing "Please Mr. Bernadette,do not smoke inside me."-Seras-hellsing
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#7 2009-07-05 14:23:06
- FenrirFinale
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So? Lol.
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#8 2009-07-05 23:04:29
- wolfsongx
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Re: The World
That was beautiful Fenrir. 
A harmonic sound such as a vibrating string is one in where the harmonics are mathematically related by what is called the harmonic series. ★
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#9 2009-07-06 10:55:55
- FenrirFinale
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Re: The World
Thanks you, X. This poem was kinda spur of the moment so I didn't know how it'd turn out. I'm glad you like it.
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