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#1 2010-06-21 08:41:22

UlfrAndi
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From: Your Darkest Dreams
Registered: 2010-05-26
Posts: 13066

no name for it yet

Leaving to a strange new place,
Old memories cannot be erased.
Missing all the times good and bad,
And all of the conversations once had.
Leaving always leaves a wounded heart,
Theres a piece thats missing, a vital part.
Wishing for the eternal pain to end,
But the wound never mends.
But in the end when alls said and done,
I can only wait for tomorrow to come.


its not my best but please give me comments and criticism i need to know how i did


And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do

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#2 2010-06-22 03:08:21

Kormiak Rue
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From: Warrior's Hold
Registered: 2010-06-19
Posts: 4476

Re: no name for it yet

Very good, Mon Ami, VERY good!

Last edited by Kormiak Rue (2010-06-22 03:08:44)


"Póg mo thóin!"  -Irish "Saying"............
"Molon labe"  -Meaning "Come and get them"  This was the Greek response to the Persians order to surrender their weapons at the Thermopylae pass in 480 B.C.E.................
"Qoud vides fecisse, factum ducas" -Latin, meaning "What you see is done, so consider it done"

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#3 2010-06-22 03:15:47

Kormiak Rue
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From: Warrior's Hold
Registered: 2010-06-19
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Re: no name for it yet

Also, how about Homesick for a name?


"Póg mo thóin!"  -Irish "Saying"............
"Molon labe"  -Meaning "Come and get them"  This was the Greek response to the Persians order to surrender their weapons at the Thermopylae pass in 480 B.C.E.................
"Qoud vides fecisse, factum ducas" -Latin, meaning "What you see is done, so consider it done"

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#4 2010-06-22 08:11:25

UlfrAndi
Spirit Walker
From: Your Darkest Dreams
Registered: 2010-05-26
Posts: 13066

Re: no name for it yet

yeah that sounds good i think i will use that.... thanx kormiak! smile


And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do

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