Leaving to a strange new place,
Old memories cannot be erased.
Missing all the times good and bad,
And all of the conversations once had.
Leaving always leaves a wounded heart,
Theres a piece thats missing, a vital part.
Wishing for the eternal pain to end,
But the wound never mends.
But in the end when alls said and done,
I can only wait for tomorrow to come.
its not my best but please give me comments and criticism i need to know how i did
Very good, Mon Ami, VERY good!
Last edited by Kormiak Rue (2010-06-22 03:08:44)
Also, how about Homesick for a name?
yeah that sounds good i think i will use that.... thanx kormiak!