I step outside, my fingers tracing the wall
coming off black with soot.
I clutch my jacket close againts the howling wind
blowing over the blackened plains that was once a forest.
suddenly the wind picks up, and shrieks thru the fallen branches.
I drop to earth and weep, realizing that it is mother nature,
screaming for the loss of her fallen children.
screaming, as the world dies.
Last edited by confuzzled wolf (2011-07-31 07:42:37)
more poetry or free form or whatever!!!!
this poem is called collide. i really didnt have anyone in mind for this, i just felt romantic.
I sit at the precipice of reality, gazing to the oceans of possibility
and then i hear you
my fear leaves me, in my mind a thought forms
and then i see you
you take my breath away, and that thought turns into hope
and then i touch you
our lips meet, and we fall into the waters of life
at last, i love you
and i know that what we have is unmeasurable, and unbreakable.
Not bad. Looks like your'e more a story teller tho. Try writing a short descriptive story.
yeah, i cant rhyme that well. i make due with what i have, and thats an good vocabulary.