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#1 2008-11-17 22:56:42

lykos
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Registered: 2007-12-25
Posts: 501

Lunar lust

Aw Luna,
How guiding is thine light to those lost in darkness,
Our gift from the creator to light our night sky,
A guide to that which we truly are,
Animals,

How savage are we?
Is their no mercy left?

The moon may drive us wild with lust.
But what is this lust?
Rage?
Love?
Or is it something more?

Some seek blood.
Some seek love.

We where all the same at birth.

Kicking and screaming.

So were did we go wrong?

Why does this moon drive us?

Many quistions

Few answers

Only the path of  the rightous shall answer.



I feel like i CAN write but don't know where to start.
I don't feel that this is anywhere near my best work but it's a start.


The moon is ever beautiful
And the moon is ever strong
Especially the moon of December 
Which makes me feel at home

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#2 2008-11-18 00:47:39

punxnotdead
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From: Canada...eh?
Registered: 2006-05-09
Posts: 11300

Re: Lunar lust

There are a few spelling issues, but the poem overall is pleasing. I like it.
(By the way, I deleted your duplicate post for you)


I'm an aspiring bodybuilder! smile
"Be yourself to be free." - The Unseen
I <3 SMALLVILLE!!!

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#3 2008-11-19 14:24:54

lykos
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Registered: 2007-12-25
Posts: 501

Re: Lunar lust

thank you my computer was laggy


The moon is ever beautiful
And the moon is ever strong
Especially the moon of December 
Which makes me feel at home

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#4 2008-11-19 14:25:24

lykos
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Registered: 2007-12-25
Posts: 501

Re: Lunar lust

by the way i think my sig is my best lunar poem


The moon is ever beautiful
And the moon is ever strong
Especially the moon of December 
Which makes me feel at home

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