Chapter 3:
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Can't wait for the next chapter. That was awesome.
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Thanks both of you! The end was definitely my favorite so far, and I can't wait for the next! Hoping to have it written and posted before next Friday when I leave.
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Wow, I was like glued to the computer screen, slowly getting closer and closer, trying to read it two fast. Also I love that you declare it to be an issue of black and white, no gray and yet the situation seems very gray indeed. I loved it. I can't wait to see where this goes. I loved the details, something else that stuck our was your use of alliteration very neat. Loved it.
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Hahahahaha, thanks! Yeah, that whole section from his "declaration" through to the end, is my favorite part of the story yet. It just flowed out like good writing does. Hahahaha, you think it's grey now? Just wait for a couple of chapters... *hint, hint. I'm actually really looking forward to the next chapter a lot too, because it's going to be the first purely self contained chapter, in other words, it's actually going to be like an "episode" where there's a "villain" an "issue", and the issue is resolved all within the piece. It's be fun, funny, and exciting!
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I'm already excited to read more. I enjoy it so much and now I have even more ideas for perfect pictures, I have started some more from the first, one from the second, and now I have ideas for the third. I love the way you write, very captivating.
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Hahaha thanks!!!!! I loved the others, and I'm looking forward to the next!!!!!
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Hahahaha, well I hope not to disappoint.
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Chapter 4 is up and edited! By the way, from now on I'm posting everything on DA so that it can't be "stolen" or anything. However, I'll still always make announcements and post the links to the chapters on here for convenience. I hope you all enjoy! This definitely the most exciting chapter yet!
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Wow White! That was amazing. I loved the twists that occurred, especially the ones that I wasn't able to predict. For example them turning on their leader, very cool. I also think it is very fascinating that you keep bringing "form" up. With the cats it was that he hasn't figured out how to use both human and wolf simultaneously. Now in this most recent addition, the wolf form, I'm guessing was played with, and yet we have yet to see him as a wolf, at least doing something other than not be noticed. Fantastic Tale, MY Friend!
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Hey well, just as promised yet another scene, this one is from the First Chapter "Peter Explains It All"
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Hope you enjoy it.
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Thanks, I had a blast drawing it.
Your tale is amazing, White. It has been an honor to read it. I can't wait for more.
Last edited by Vindicator (2009-06-17 11:36:27)
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Hey White, I was able to do another piece of art for your tale. This is from your amazing Chapter 3. "Murderous Mistresses." Well catch you later.
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Yes! Simply amazing my friend, seems like everytime I get on you give me another surprise! Hahahaha, if I'm ever published (very unlikely), I promise your work will be featured.
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Wow that would be neat. I think you could get it published, it is after all unique and very intriguing. I literally slowly get closer and closer to the screen as I read it. Completely captivated.
Last edited by Vindicator (2009-06-24 23:48:33)
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Hahahaha, well thanks! I'm still waiting for your next chapter btw...
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I'm actually hoping to have one posted before the our nations Independence Day, before I go off on my dig, which I'm so excited for. Fremont Indian site here I come.
Last edited by Vindicator (2009-06-24 23:54:38)
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When do you get back again? I may have mispoken, I actually get back the 12th.
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I will be returning on the 12th of July as well, my friend. Exciting, we must have impeccable timing.
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As promised, I give you Chapter 5! I sincerely hope that each of you enjoys it immensely! It grows a little darker than usual, and perhaps as a spoiler, perhaps not, begins a series of events that will dictate the next couple of installments. Chapter 5 is pretty short and to the point, but the good news is that as I have briefly mentioned before, Chapters 6 and 7 are already done as well!!! In fact, I've actually already transferred Chapter 6 to electronic form today, but am withholding it until tomorrow. Chapter 7, the conclusion of Volume I, will follow on Wednesday along with an announcement of the title of Volume II! Hahahaha, anyways, enough of that, here's the link and I hope you like it! http://flwhitewolf.deviantart.com/art/V … -129410379
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Fantastic White, Fantastic! You are correct it did get darker, in such an interesting way. I enjoy watching the types of situations you throw your characters into. It is interesting how, a moment of light shines out just to be consumed in darkness. I'm really, really excited to see where this takes him....potentially into darkness, a very interesting idea indeed.
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Thanks Vin! Hope you didn't mind me throwing a bit of a shout out in there to you (the Ogden Post). Hahahahaha, anyways, as promised here is tonight's installment in the series, Ch. 6. Some really good action in this one, and a great lead into tomorrow's blockbuster. I'm so excited!!! Anyways, here is Ch. 6, enjoy!
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Hahah, I did see that, and my first response was to look to see if there was an Ogden in Oklahoma.
Off to get lost in a tale, so exciting.............
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Hahahahaha, glad you saw it. I purposely made sure it wasn't the same as yours for obvious reasons, but I still wanted to give you a little connection in the story.
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Wow, that was a great chapter. I love the decent of morals. It is interesting as it appears White, is going Black. Along those lines it also appears that he is slowly becoming what he wishes to destroy. Love the themes here. I felt really sad for the character as he slowly appears to fall.
Interestingly enough I have a plan to mention a connection to yourself in the next tale I'm getting ready to write.
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