This is a poem that I wrote just a few minutes ago, jsut popped in my head. I'm planning on making this into a song, I've already got the guitar riff in my head...

Dark, Loathing, and Cold

Living inside this empty shell
Forever locked in your never-ending hell
Can you see death, at the end of this hall?
Ready to take you, whenever you fall

Can you not see what you're becoming?
Dark, loathing and cold
Can you not take this pain all away
You're dark, loathing and cold
Take away the lock and key
But you're dark, loathing and cold
What the hell is wrong with you?
You're dark, loathing and cold

Locked up forever in this cage
Showing no signs of release
I'm not showing you the pain you're causing
But on the inside I am

Dying,
Suffering,
Relaying on this pain
Cannot die,
Lying,
Suffering from this pain,
The murderer,
On the inside,
Will be coming out,
To kill you,
To rid you,
Of what you've become

Can you not see what you've become?
Dark, loathing and cold
Can you not take this pain all away
You're dark, loathing and cold
Take away the lock and key
But you're dark, loathing and cold
What the hell is wrong with you?
You're dark, loathing and cold

Last edited by lord_hondros (2009-11-04 08:28:19)