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#1 2009-11-07 22:48:15
- fangsofsorrow
- lonesome protector
- From: the darkest corners of my soul
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OMG ANOTHER FIRST (poety)
now i already know this aint gonna be anywhere near as good as Moony's but its a start
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The Void
The void
It can’t be filled
Not by pain
Not by joy
Not by loneliness
And after she left
Not by love.
Once it was filled,
Now it’s as empty as ever
I hold the blade to wrist,
I wait for the blood to surge,
For my life to fall
Deep into the void.
Waking I know it was a dream
She is still here
The moon’s light shines
Upon the surface that was the void
im bi.... can you blame me?
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#2 2009-11-07 23:04:09
- Moonfur
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- From: My world of mist and shadow.
- Registered: 2009-01-02
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Re: OMG ANOTHER FIRST (poety)
wow...well,dont say that,its better than mine...but...sounds like my situation,but backwards...
"In the time it took for you to walk down one little hallway,I went to London,got my head blown off,and came back."-Schrodinger-Hellsing "Now lets go die like mangy dogs!"-bernadotte-hellsing "Please Mr. Bernadette,do not smoke inside me."-Seras-hellsing
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#3 2009-11-08 11:41:19
- fangsofsorrow
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Re: OMG ANOTHER FIRST (poety)
if my mate ever leaves me i will kill myself, so yea, but yours is really a lot better
im bi.... can you blame me?
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#4 2009-11-08 13:01:07
- Moonfur
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Re: OMG ANOTHER FIRST (poety)
heh,i guess i have to take your word for it.but,i think you shouldnt..if your mate leaves you,then maybe you werent ment to be together.dont let yourself perish if someone might be outside,waiting for you.it may hurt you alot,but that doesnt mean you should kill yourself.its hard to get over,but you will...eventually.
"In the time it took for you to walk down one little hallway,I went to London,got my head blown off,and came back."-Schrodinger-Hellsing "Now lets go die like mangy dogs!"-bernadotte-hellsing "Please Mr. Bernadette,do not smoke inside me."-Seras-hellsing
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#5 2009-11-08 13:07:29
- fangsofsorrow
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Re: OMG ANOTHER FIRST (poety)
no i dont think i ever would find another, my mate is perfect for me, nobody else could ever make me feel the same
im bi.... can you blame me?
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#6 2009-11-08 14:42:28
- Moonfur
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Re: OMG ANOTHER FIRST (poety)
yo would be surprised.but,if your mate is with you,it is alright.just dont mess up,and do soemthing like i did..
"In the time it took for you to walk down one little hallway,I went to London,got my head blown off,and came back."-Schrodinger-Hellsing "Now lets go die like mangy dogs!"-bernadotte-hellsing "Please Mr. Bernadette,do not smoke inside me."-Seras-hellsing
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#7 2009-11-08 15:36:16
- fangsofsorrow
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Re: OMG ANOTHER FIRST (poety)
what did you do
im bi.... can you blame me?
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#8 2009-11-12 10:36:40
- lovewerewolf
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Re: OMG ANOTHER FIRST (poety)
liked the poem
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