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#1 2009-09-24 19:11:25

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The Demon's Nature

A new story that has to do with... I'll let you see. 

Chapter 1: Containment Procedures

Somewhere under the Rocky Mountains
8:22 A.M.          September 22, 2024
   
    “Under these mortal’s constrictive chains you cannot escape.  You must be free!”  A dry, raspy voice said.
    “What’ll happen if I don’t?” another voice answered, it was worried, frightened of the consequences of its next actions. 
    “You will experience unimaginable pain, you will witness death like no other,” The voice’s tone was patient.  It had waited a long time in darkness, it longed for a glimpse of light. Patience was a critical virtue and tool for survival.  “It must be soon though, time is running out…” it rasped, vanishing; leaving the other voice in pitch blackness.
  A low moan echoed through the darkness, surrounding the remaining darkness in its rancid breath.  It morphed into a scream, adding a far worse scent to the rancid air. 
    Seconds later, the darkness turned into flame, blinding the other voice with searing heat and brightness.  The voice stared into the fire.  It narrowed to a thin point, minimizing to a thin vertical line.  A furious roar erupted from the flame, it surged forward, the scream gaining thunderous volumes as it neared.  It was inches away, searing and deafening all the way.
    The man woke up screaming, drenched in a cold sweat.  His chest heaved as his breathing shifted from rapid to normal.  He could still feel the hot fire under the sheen of sweat.  He gasped a few times, shuddering rapidly.  He blinked rapidly, getting used to the bright light.  Looking around, he spotted a young woman with dark auburn hair staring at him.  Her large, green eyes were wide in fright and worry. 
    Her mouth was moving but silent.  “A- a- are you okay?” she asked, stuttering.  She blinked, and then coughed loudly, putting her fist in the way of the sprayed germs.   Her face contorted in pain, adding a red hue to her pale complexion.  Her eyes bugged out, tearing up. 
    The man didn’t know who she was, but she was concerned.  His heart jerked at the thought.  Nodding, he said, “I’m fine, just fine.” His throat was dry and itchy.  He needed water.  Lifting his head higher, he looked in front of him.  A small brown table stood by the plain white door.  Two ugly green school chairs sat beside each other, tucked under the table. 
    He tried to shift the weight to his elbows, but something constricted against his ribs, abdomen, upper arms and wrists.  Glancing down at his body, he spied the leather straps wrapped around his body with wide eyes.  His heart rate soared; he didn’t feel safe at all, confined in the strange room with a stranger woman.  The room was too empty.  It was more like a prison cell than a room.
    The man didn’t know whether to scream in terror or yell in a sudden rage.  He didn’t know if he should try to be free of the leather, or if he should wait and see what happens next.  Would a man with a gun walk in and turn them into Swiss cheese, or would a scientist in a white lab coat start experimenting on them?  The questions of what and if were starting to give him a migraine. 
    He tried to crane his head back against the pillow to see what was behind him.  A stinging pain jolted through his neck, like being shocked.  He screamed and his body jumped violently against the straps.  The leather tightened, pinning his still jerking body to the bed.  His fist clinched and then unclenched a few times against the cold steel of the bed frame.  He snapped his jaws shut, screaming against his teeth; spittle flew from between his teeth and landed on his bed sheet covered chest.
    Excruciating pain was all he knew for the next few moments.  When it was all over he lay gasping for air, sweating profusely under the covers.  His mind was blank of all thought; his senses momentarily shut down.  He didn’t know how long it took for his brain to function normally.  Lolling his head, he saw the young woman staring at him again.  He rolled his head again, staring at the blinding white ceiling.  It struck a flare behind his eyes; he closed them, trying to dim the brightness in his eyes.  It didn’t succeed, but he kept his eyes closed.
    His memory of the dream sprung back to his forethoughts.  Under all the pain, he had forgotten about it.  “You will experience unimaginable pain...” the voice from his dream rasped again.  His eyes sprung open wide. 

    The guard named Keller glared over the technician’s shoulder at the computer screen.  A new camera system had malfunctioned in one of the cells in the containment center.  His face was set into a stony rage, his eyes bulging, face blushed red.  “Those are new cameras, new!  How did they break?” Keller snarled. 
    “We’ll figure it out in just a sec sir,” the technician squeaked.  He pushed the chair back, forcing Keller to step back, and ducked under the computer desk.  The technician took a chunk of gray wall out and threw it on the floor with a grunt, dust spewing into the air, landing on Keller’s black boots. 
    He stood glaring down at the technician impatiently; he didn’t have time for this shite, Keller had more important things to do.  Like guard the entrance, or smile in vile glee at the terrible experiments being done.  No, he’s watching some worthless nerd fix the cameras.  He was bored, trigger-happy, he needed to feel the recoil of his gun in his hands; needed to feel the adrenaline pumping few his veins after killing someone. 
    Opening his chest pocket to pull out a cigarette, he plucked one out of its pack.  It was a cheap generic brand that used to resemble Marlboro but the company was shut down during the nuclear war.  The butt of the cigarette just reached his lips when a hiss of static erupted from the earpiece strapped to the side of his head.
    After the short burst, a tinny, strong voice came through.  “Keller, we found a saboteur, he’s headed straight for the control room!”
    “Let him get here, I’ll take care of the rest.” He answered quietly, cigarette bobbing on his lips as he spoke.  His right hand went immediately to his holster, grabbing for the automatic pistol.  The safety was already off; it was one of his favorite regulations in the compounds.  The regulation stated that because of the volatile nature of the experiments, all guards had to keep their safety off for readiness.  The tooth bearing, vicious smile of his returned.
    The technician glanced up at Keller, and jerked back against the smile.  He saw the gun in the guard’s hand and swallowed.  “That’s not for me is it?”
    Smile broadening, he answered, “No.”  Just one word, pure and simple English, coming from Keller’s mouth was like speaking to the Devil.  Whoever the gun was for, they picked the wrong day to intrude; because Keller was bored.  The technician blinked rapidly and turned his back, continuing his work.  “I didn’t say get back to work, get your ass up!” he snapped.
    The technician wheeled around under the desk and


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#2 2009-09-25 03:40:40

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Re: The Demon's Nature

more!!!!!!!!!


"Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. That is alchemy's first law of Equivalent Exchange. ...In those days, we really believed that to be the world's one, and only truth...."
    Alphonse Elric --- Fullmetal Alchemist

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#3 2009-09-25 04:58:04

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Re: The Demon's Nature

Right on man!  You have brilliant taste in brutal horror! More will come, today....


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#4 2009-09-25 09:46:35

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Re: The Demon's Nature

ok!!!!


"Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. That is alchemy's first law of Equivalent Exchange. ...In those days, we really believed that to be the world's one, and only truth...."
    Alphonse Elric --- Fullmetal Alchemist

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#5 2009-09-26 20:57:51

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Re: The Demon's Nature

All right, here's more...

The technician wheeled around under the desk and stood hastily.  Keller turned towards the door and stalked to it, cigarette still hanging between his lips.  He brought the lighter out of the same pocket and lit the cigarette with one hand.  Loud, running footsteps pounded on the cement.  Keller couldn’t see the saboteur; he still had to round the corner before meeting face to face with Death. 
    He leaned out of the doorway, and then steeped out under the lights.  Keller lifted the gun and aimed the barrel down the brightly lit hallway at chest level.  His hands were steady; he held the gun in his right hand and smoked with the left.  Yelling echoed down the hallway, and then the pounding footsteps got louder.
    A teenager in a blue radiation suit jumped around the corner.  He narrowly kept his balance, until he spotted Keller.  The man jerked back in mid step, falling ass first onto the ground.  He yelped in pain and crab walked backwards.  The other three guards quickstepped around the corner, blocking the young man’s path.  Keller glared at the man, infuriated by his intrusion.
    “Boy, you just made my day interesting, and that gives you a reward.” Keller said cheerily, his face still contorted in fury. 
    The boy’s expression of terror changed to that of glee.  Keller’s eyes only revealed slight confusion; he didn’t know why the kid was smiling, he was about to die.  “What’s the reward?” he asked starting to giggle.  “Are you gonna give me that sexy b****?” he asked, looking back at the female guard. 
    Lola Stanton was a red headed beauty to Keller’s perspective.  Her long legs and nicely figured body, nothing abnormally large, just right for him.  Her smile brightened his dark soul.  Now she was looking at the kid in revulsion.  “I don’t gently caress anything with that much acne.”
    “gently caress you whore, it’ll get you all sweaty and oily, the way you like it!” the kid said, howling with laughter.  All of there faces were turned into a mask of disgust.  That grated on Keller’s last nerve, the punk ass’s laughter, so he shot him.  He pulled the trigger and sent two bullets into the air.  The first bullet struck the kid’s glove covered index finger on his right hand.  The second bullet struck his palm, leaving a gaping hole in the middle of his hand.
    Scarlet blood arched into the air from his severed finger and seeped from his palm wound.  The blood painted the fluorescent lights above them, giving the hallway a reddish hue.  He was screaming in pain, cradling the injured hand to his chest.  The dark blood was turning most of the front of his suit violet under the new lighting.  Keller ran at him, lifting his foot into a kick at the last second.
    His steel toed boot smashed through the glass helmet and connected with the kids face, a sickening crunch of bone.  The kid’s upper body smacked into the cement, still pinned under Keller’s boot.  The screaming began again, in higher volume under the steel of the boot.  “Quit screaming!” he yelled at the kid.  He lifted his foot and set it on the floor beside the kid’s head. 
    His screaming turned into loud moaning, and then a soft whimpering.  Shards of glass were imbedded in both cheeks; one particularly large piece slit his left eyeball in half, spraying long gouts of blood onto the floor.  A nose was no longer visible under the gory ruins of his face.  Everyone looked down at the whimpering kid.   A large, gleeful smile was plastered to Keller’s face.
    Laughter started bubbling from his chest, roaring from his lungs. Butch, a large black hulk of a man followed suit.  He tried to speak through the laughter, but failed, just shaking his head and laughing.    Lola and another woman on his team, Emily shook their heads at the laughing men.
    Keller started to realize that the cigarette had fallen out of his mouth.  He finally stopped laughing, Butch followed suit.  “You little punk ass,” Keller snapped at the kid, “You owe me gently caressing cigarette boy!  What the gently caress’s wrong with you, making me drop my cigarette!” he yelled.  Keller didn’t like when he lost a cigarette. 
    The kid stared up at him in terror, his mouth was opening but nothing drifted to Keller’s ears.  He leaned down, cupping his left ear with a hand; his face was a mixture of a frown and rage.  “Dis- distraction,” the kid gasped, blood welling around his shattered teeth.  An even larger amount of blood spilled profusely from his split lips, they were already swelling.
    Heart rate stopping for a moment, Keller’s frowned deepened.  He really hoped he heard the kid wrong.  “You’re gently caressing lying kid,” he hissed, trying to deny what the kid said.  The kid shook his head rapidly, almost screaming again.  That wasn’t good, if the kid was just a distraction, what the gently caress was going on.  He looked at Butch, “You said to me the kid was a saboteur,” he said, jerking his head at the bloody mess lying by his feet.
    “He was in the electronics room.” Butch hastily answered.  Snarling something unintelligible, Keller turned around and raced to the control center, the room he was just in.  It was the technician, it had to be.  He almost slipped on the way; his shoes were soaked with blood.  Catching his balance, he jerked to a stop in front of the control room doorway, whiplashing his body into the room.  Butch and rest of his team stopped in front of the door, confused on what was happening.   
    Adrenaline pumping from his heart, he quickly gazed around the room.  The technician was gone.  “It was the technician, the little wanker!” he screamed.  He turned on his team, “Get the wanker, now!” he screamed again.  He wasn’t bored anymore, but he wasn’t expecting this.  His team ran down the hallway, kicking in all of the three other doors, one member for each door. 
    His team quickly searched each room and continued down the hall.  Keller stayed behind as they moved on.  They knew not to disobey orders.  He rushed to the desk and flipped open a brown wooden box nailed to it.  A large red emergency button sat in the center of it.  Keller didn’t want to press it, but it would speed things up.  He couldn’t allow that man to escape, a lot of bad things would happen if he did.  Sighing and grimacing, he pushed down on the button.


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#6 2009-09-28 15:40:20

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Re: The Demon's Nature

wow great segment please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!


"Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. That is alchemy's first law of Equivalent Exchange. ...In those days, we really believed that to be the world's one, and only truth...."
    Alphonse Elric --- Fullmetal Alchemist

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#7 2009-09-28 20:11:04

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Will do man, the action speeds up to sound barrier and never slows down for the next segments! wink


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#8 2009-09-29 04:55:26

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Re: The Demon's Nature

yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


"Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. That is alchemy's first law of Equivalent Exchange. ...In those days, we really believed that to be the world's one, and only truth...."
    Alphonse Elric --- Fullmetal Alchemist

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#9 2009-09-29 04:59:01

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Re: The Demon's Nature

Today, more will come!!!!


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#10 2009-09-29 05:36:22

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Re: The Demon's Nature

ok!!


"Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. That is alchemy's first law of Equivalent Exchange. ...In those days, we really believed that to be the world's one, and only truth...."
    Alphonse Elric --- Fullmetal Alchemist

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#11 2009-09-29 21:27:29

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Re: The Demon's Nature

A new short part...

A deafening alarm immediately split the air through the entire compound.  The lights dimmed, turning into alternating yellow and red strobe lights.  Keller didn’t like to set the alarms off; he wanted to show everyone his team can handle an operation alone.  Unfortunately the circumstances of this particular intrusion, with so much at risk, he had no choice. 
    He turned back to the door, wanting to be quick about eradicating the problem.  It was in his training to fix something and kill someone quickly.  He stopped; dust from the tiled ceiling fell onto the crook between his neck and shoulder.  Cocking his head, he tried to concentrate through the screaming siren.  Inches from the doorway, standing and listening for a few seconds.  There was a loud crash behind him, dust sifting wildly in the air. 
    Instinctively crouching, he whirled around on the balls of his feet; ready to strike with a balled fist.  His arm shot out, stretching his fist into thin air and dust.  Standing up warily, he watched the blackness of the missing tile piece.  He knew someone was up there, but they sure as hell weren’t one of his men.  He pointed his gun at the ceiling tiles and pulled the trigger. 
    Large holes the size of quarters erupted in the ceiling, clouding the room with dust.  Blood dripped from a cluster of holes two tiles away from him, dripping on the ground with an almost inaudible plop!  The dripping sped up, getting louder as whatever wound the guy had was seeping blood more profusely.  It started to drop like a fountain, a continual flow, pooling on the ground at Keller’s feet. 
    He looked up, smiling at the holes leaking the fluids.  “What motherfucker thought he could hide up there in the ceiling?” he asked.
    Someone dropped to the ground behind him silently.  He frowned, turning around to face the technician.  The technician was bigger, stronger looking than a few minutes ago.  Well that’s gently caressed up, Keller thought; this is not my gently caressing day- was all he got to think before the technician punched him square in the nose.
    Blood squirting from his broken nose, Keller grabbed the man’s wrist and twisted, pulling his body closer and bringing his forearm up for a strike.  He smashed his massive biceps into the man’s throat, dragging him to the ground hard.  He grunted as his knee caps smacked into the concrete, his arm was still pinning the man’s neck into the ground, adding pressure; hopefully crushing his windpipes.  In a feat of acrobatics, the technician recoiled immediately; bending his body and kicking Keller in the head with a large boot. 
    He screamed in pain and surprise as the man kept kicking him in the head rapidly; Keller’s head was pounded in the ground with each hit.  After the fifth pounding, he released the man’s neck and twisted his arms behind his back, grabbing the leg kicking it.  He pushed himself up, keeping a tight grip on the man’s ankle, flipped him over his shoulder and out the door.  As the man hit the wall and recovered, Keller took a close look at him.
    He was thin and tall, well built with wiry muscles.  Short spiky brown hair topped a wolfish head.  The man’s face contorted in rage, lips drawing back from gleaming teeth.  His eyes changed to, causing Keller to rear back in fright; the man’s eyes were all black.  “What the gently caress?” Keller snarled the question out of his mouth.  The man didn’t answer.
    The technician brought a long, black iron chain out of the pocket of his jeans.  He took the button down shirt off his body, revealing a tattoo of a red skull.  The skull was hideously distended from a human skull into a wolf skull.  The man wrapped the chain around both hands and pulled, checking his grip.  A half growling, half hissing noise of rage escaped his throat as he lunged at Keller, chain in hand. 
    Keller reared back into the doorway; he couldn’t allow the chain to be wrapped around his neck.  Ducking, he lurched forward, trying to bear hug the man’s midsection.  As he ducked, the technician flipped his body and landed on Keller’s chest, feet first.  They both rolled on the ground, Keller sprawled on his back and the technician rolling expertly and rising quickly.


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#12 2009-09-30 04:08:28

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wow very good work
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


"Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. That is alchemy's first law of Equivalent Exchange. ...In those days, we really believed that to be the world's one, and only truth...."
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#13 2009-10-07 16:48:53

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Sorry for the late update.

The technician turned around and glared at Keller, who was on his back and groaning in pain; his spine felt like fire from the impact. 
    He stood, hissing through clenched teeth in pain.  The technician didn’t give him time to recover though.  One end of the chain was dropped to the ground; a large, curved knife with a serrated edge was produced from the other.  He swung his free arm at Keller’s throat, it was too fast for him to dodge; bringing the arm back, he watched with a stoic face.  Hot sticky blood arched through the air in long gouts, painting the technicians face in dark scarlet, more blood started pooling on the floor and even more painted the wall mounted screen behind the technician. 
    Eyes widening in terror, Keller’s hand flew to his throat, the wound was too wide and deep to stop the blood flow; the only good thing was the knife hadn’t split open his carotid artery.  It was only two centimeters away though; he could feel it by his fingers, blocked only by a few wire thin strands of tendons.  His heart rate felt like a thousand beats per minute, blood seeping like a broken pipe through his fingers and onto his feet. 
    Vision tunneling, he dropped to his knees.  He couldn’t hear anything, not even his heartbeat; an eternal silence meant only for the dead, not by the living.  Keller was frightened by how much longer he will have to listen to the silence; it tore his very soul to pieces as his life force ebbed away.  It was taking a long time, unless of course time slows for the dying.  He didn’t know, he only felt the stinging pain and watched as the technician lunged forward again, chain wrapped around his hand.
    Keller didn’t know how, but a strong voice in the back of his nearly dying mind told him to die fighting; not to sit on his knees waiting for the Grim Reaper to steal his soul.  He listened to the voice in his head and obeyed, memories from the past relayed through his mind.  Memories of him telling people that if he was killed in war; like the time he told Lola he would do anything in his weakening power to reap last minute vengeance on his killer. 
    Another thought, the one that sent an overdrive of adrenaline into his system was Lola.  Never in his life had he sensed someone was the one he might stay with for the rest of his life, he had an urge to protect her.  He knew the technician wasn’t the only man like this in the compound; he needed to find her and help her kill the bastard intruders.  His half lidded eyes followed his killer, his hands tried weakly to find a weapon of any kind.
    He couldn’t find anything, so he quickly stood up, the adrenaline surging through his veins.  The technician faltered in his slow motion charge as he saw Keller stand up.  The rage in his face rivaled the technician’s former expression of bloodlust.  Bloodlust could not define Keller’s expression as he rapidly advanced on the man in front of him.  The Devil’s minion, the technician, may have killed his team; Keller’s face was the wrath of God as he wrecked havoc on the souls of evil incarnate.
    Why he was still alive and not lying on the floor from blood loss escaped Keller’s knowledge, it also escaped the technician’s mind; it was his turn to gape in terror.  Then he felt a tingling at his neck, putting a hand back up, he felt scarred skin, the wound was sealing itself up.  All of Keller’s senses came back with the adrenaline; the screams of the siren was like an angel’s song in his ears.  He smiled; a bubbling evil laugh escaping his lungs.  The technician’s face changed again to anger, they stared each other in the eyes, determined to kill.     

    After a few minutes of hearing the alarm, a slew of doctors and nurses crashed into the chamber where the man and the woman were lying on hospital beds.  Two doctors and two nurses stood at each bed and tugged, pulling the beds with a jerk towards the doors.  They headed out; the woman’s group first and then his.  They ran down a dark corridor with slime covered brick walls; the changing lights made him feel nauseated.  He closed his eyes as they ran, listening to the wailing sirens and feeling the bed bounce from shaky wheels. 
    He didn’t know how long it took, but when he felt the bed suddenly stop, he opened his eyes and looked up at an angelic face.  It was a young blonde nurse, hair cascading with curls just past her shoulders.  She was frowning down at him, he face showing pure terror, her eyes as wide as a deer’s stuck in headlights.  She bent down, close to his ear and whispered. 
    “There is a man with a gun around the corner, just stay calm; we’ll get you out of here.” She said; her accent had a touch of Southern to it.  His eyes widened, she took his clammy, sweaty hand in her dry, cold one and squeezed tightly.  He squeezed back gently, hearing running footsteps on a concrete floor.  Heart pounding, he lifted his head, groaning when the leather straps forced him to put his head back on the pillow.
    The nurse’s frown deepened, she watched him for a second, considering her options.  Looking up at a tall older man with salt and pepper hair, she gripped his arm to get his attention.  He looked at her with a violent jerk of his head. 
    Before he could respond, the nurse leaned over the hospital bed and whispered into the old man’s ear.  The older man looked down at his patient intently, thinking over the young nurse’s request.  The doctor nodded gravely and swallowed, fear showed bright in his eyes.  The nurse nodded and pulled a small key out of the breast pocket of her blue scrubs.  She inserted the key in a few locks on the leather straps and twisted, quickly relieving him of the entrapment.
    “You are free now, what is your next move?” the voice from his dreams rasped.  He didn’t know what to do next.
    “What’s my name,” he whispered hoarsely, his throat was still dry.  He sat up in the bed and looked up at the nurse, truly confused.  He had no recollection of his past, how or why he was down here, and not even his own gently caressing name popped into his head. 
    The nurse pursed her lips and then smiled slightly.  “Daniel.” She said quietly, leaning down to his ear.  He could feel her breast brush across his chest, it felt odd to him, he didn’t remember feeling anything like that.  The footsteps were at the corner, a man in jeans and a black shirt jumped out of the dim lights near the corner. 
    The man was well built; his shirt was almost too tight on his bulky chest.  Tanned skin and grey eyes contrasted against his outfit.  Long, jet black curly hair tied into a ponytail; the man had a striking face with a strong jaw.  A large M16 rifle was cradled in his hands, barrel raised at chest level.  If the man chose to fire now, everyone in that hall would have been cut in half from the stream of the bullets.
    “All men on the right, all women on the left, now!” he demanded over the sirens.  His voice had a thick Middle Eastern accent, but Daniel couldn’t place which country it was from.  At first no one moved, staring at him in terror; he snarled something in Arabic and raised the gun higher.


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#14 2009-10-08 07:37:20

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Re: The Demon's Nature

O.O good segment keep it up!!!!


"Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. That is alchemy's first law of Equivalent Exchange. ...In those days, we really believed that to be the world's one, and only truth...."
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#15 2009-10-19 21:56:53

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Sorry for the late update....

It took him a mere second to select his example.  Aiming the gun at the young man closest to him, he squeezed the trigger.  The young doctor’s head exploded in a spray of blood; squirting brain matter and skull fragments into the face of the young nurse beside him.  She screamed and complied, quickly followed by everyone else.
    Daniel staggered off of the hospital bed and fell to his knees, wincing in pain.  The older doctor quickly gripped his arm and pulled him up, face frightened and angry.  Backs facing the wall, everyone watched as the man stalked to the woman on the bed.  He stood over her, right in front of Daniel, he couldn’t see the woman’s face through the gunman’s back.  She must have been terrified though; Daniel could hear her cries of fear.
    He pressed the communicator to his neck and spoke in a whisper; nothing could be understood over the sirens.  He asked questions twice and then nodded twice, acknowledging what he heard.  Everyone watched him tensely, wondering what was next.  Turning his body, he walked down to the end of the hallway and turned his gaze on all of the men.  It was a quick swiveling of the eyes, when they slowly turned back down the row, they stopped on Daniel.
    The man’s lip twitched upward a centimeter, then dropped.  “Come here,” he demanded, pointing the gun at Daniel’s head.  He swallowed; body trembling as he slowly stepped forward.  The gunman prodded him to stop, poking him in the chest with the rifle barrel.  He inched it towards his throat, pushing the barrel tightly against his windpipe.
    “Disobey anything I say… this bullet will blow the entire back of your gently caressing head out.” He hissed into Daniel’s ear.  Patting his shoulder, the gunman shoved him into the foot of the bed.  “Somebody better get her off that bed,”
    The young nurse who told him his name stepped forward, swallowing and breathing deeply.  It didn’t look like she wanted to go through with releasing the other woman; it didn’t feel right to Daniel.  The man poked Daniel in the back of the head with the barrel, who jerked at the cold steel; which got the nurse moving.  The nurse helped the woman climb out of the bed, gripping her arm. 
    “All three of you follow me,” the gunman said.  He turned around and walked to the corner, not bothering to see if they were following him.  The nurse looked at the old doctor and mouthed something; tears sprung to the old man’s eyes and he nodded sagely.  They started following him around the corner.
    Still walking, the gunman yelled over his shoulder, “Doctor Marshall, I suggest you come along to!” He looked at Daniel and grinned, and then laughed heartily.
    Daniel looked over his shoulder to see the nurse and the other woman; the old doctor, Doctor Marshall, was racing to catch up.  He was in his fifties at least, and he still moved fast enough.  He reached towards the young nurse and whispered in her ear, she nodded and gripped his hand.  He tightened his own fist in hers.  He didn’t realize he slowed to a near stop until the gunman snagged him forward with a snarl.
    He kept his strong gloved hand on Daniel’s shoulder.  It hurt; he knew it was going to bruise.  “All of you hurry up, we need to be out of here in two minutes or else!” he yelled to the rest of the group.
    “Why?” Daniel asked, matching the gunmen’s own running pace. 
    “You don’t want to be here, trust me!” his voice was panicked.  Daniel knew that if something could terrorize a terrorist, he was going to be afraid of it to.
    He kept running down the hall.  They reached an elevator at the end of the hall after another two corners.  Sweat was pouring from each of them.  The endless drone of the sirens finally ceased, along with the dizzying strobe lights.  The doors opened a few feet before they reached them and they all piled inside the cool elevator. 
    Daniel knew that if the man didn’t have a gun; neither of them would have followed him.  He didn’t think any of them wanted a repeat from only a few moments earlier.  He sure as hell didn’t know where he was.  The gunman seemed to know where to go though.  The elevator jerked upwards after being set to the first floor.  They were on the fifth.  It was a short way up and Daniel knew there wouldn’t be a chance to strike back. 
    He should have punched the back of the man’s neck back in the hallway; hopefully paralyzing him.  Now wasn’t the time, especially when he felt the barrel of the M16 against his cheek. He swallowed, wishing he could change the last few minutes.

    The technician swung his chain covered fist at Keller’s kidney for a third time.  He jerked back and punched the man in the gut; he grunted in pain and doubled over for a second.  Keller took the man’s inattention to good use, grabbing the knife by his foot and immediately bringing it up.  An inch from striking the man’s forehead, he flipped backwards, sending a large foot under Keller’s chin.
    He choked and felt his jawbone disconnect, teeth shattering; blood sprayed into the air and landed on him as his spine hit the cold linoleum floor.  His head recoiled violently, aching in waves of agony.  He screamed through clenched and bloody teeth.


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#16 2009-11-01 18:22:33

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Re: The Demon's Nature

Hey I'm back.  I got rid of the last post on Word because it didn't fit in with the story line.  These are the events that take place right after (determined to kill) so scratch all the other stuff from your mind.  Anyway....

Jean Rattler watched the clear black and white image of the halls in a mask of rage.  The sirens were giving him a migraine behind the eyes.  He turned around and glared at his secretary, huddled beside the desk.  She was out of the way of gunfire.  Jean wasn’t worried about it though; the doors were five inches of bullet proof glass.  He turned back to the screen.
The cameras finally reached its last section of the loop; the containment chamber.  Static fuzz was the only the camera revealed.  His mouth was set into a hard line, until he saw the disruptive fuzz on the screen.  Then the corners of his lips lifted from his gums in a snarl.
“gently caress this!” he roared, pounding his fist on either side of the keyboard.  Before his brain registered anything, his hand whip-lashed to his breast pocket; gripping the black cell phone.
Immediately clicking the redial button, he stuck it to his ear.  It rang only half of once before being answered.  “Mr. Jean, don’t worry about the projects!  They’re safe in the chambers!” a woman’s breathless voice said.
“Doctor Carla, follow the containment procedures and stay in that gently caressing room at all costs.”
“Yes sir,” the phone line went dead.  Jean wanted know what was going on in there, but as long as the containment procedures were followed…
The camera loop started over again, showing different scenes of carnage every ten seconds.  Only two members of General Keller’s unit remained standing.  Keller himself and the strong woman Lola; until he saw the large knife plunge into Lola’s throat and exit at the base of her skull.  Gouts of black blood obscured most of the camera lens.
His secretary, Janice, whimpered behind him.  “Please turn it off,” she pleaded. 
“No, something’s not right,” he said quietly.  He quickly turned the loop off.  He didn’t know what exactly wasn’t right, but it had to do with Lola’s killer.  A hand with a handkerchief wiped away the blood on the camera.  Jean watched intently as the screen was entirely wiped of blood.
Lola’s headless body was slumped against a wall; jagged cuts were the only thing left in its place.  A head blocked the camera screen, Jean gasped and jerked back.  His eyes widened, jaw dropped, in pure terror.  “Not possible, not gently caressing possible!” he yelled.
The head was more a skull than flesh.  Hollow cheekbones and razor sharp teeth, no skin connected the remaining jaw bones.  A black, forked tongue flicked out of the blackness of its mouth, flicking between the teeth.  The being had no eyes, they were empty sockets.  It knew Jean was scared behind the camera; the being’s remaining chunks of lips curled from long fangs in the most terrifying grin he’d ever seen. 
The skull vanished. The screen went black, reflecting Jean’s terrified face.  His secretary was crying silently by the desk.  He felt his heart beat too fast.  His vision blackening, he gripped the edge of the desk in front of him and turned.  He slumped to the ground, terrified eyes looking at his secretary.  Then blackness obscured his vision, he felt nothing.             
   
    The technician swung his chain covered fist at Keller’s kidney for a third time.  He jerked back and punched the man in the gut; he grunted in pain and doubled over for a second.  Keller took the man’s inattention to good use, grabbing the knife by his foot and immediately bringing it up.  An inch from striking the man’s forehead, he flipped backwards, sending a large foot under Keller’s chin.
    He choked and felt his jawbone disconnect, teeth shattering; blood sprayed into the air and landed on him as his spine hit the cold linoleum floor.  His head recoiled violently, aching in waves of agony.  He screamed through clenched teeth.  Slowly getting up, the room swam; there was more than one technician.  Three to be exact, but semi-transparent arms swung at him from all sides.
    A few of the arms conjoined to make a massive tree branch of flesh and air swing at his head.  Gasping in shock, he ducked back and kicked at the middle one.  His foot went through it and fell back to the floor.  Eyes widening he brought both legs up in a kick at the side technicians.  His foot connected with the one on the right, the momentum bringing the rest of his body off of the floor. 
    He felt his left foot slip on blood as it landed, but he quickly regained balance.  The technician wheezed and coughed blood under him.  He added pressure to his right foot, which he directed at the man’s throat, pressing down.  The technician wasn’t going to go without a fight though.  He squirmed violently under Keller’s foot; it was like riding a surfboard during a tsunami. 
    The technician’s chained arm was sandwiched under him, chafing his spine raw.  His other arm was free though, and it had a knife.  Keller was growing tired of this battle; he was going to end it now.  He jerked his legs back and fell to his knees; his right knee crushing the arm with the knife before it could strike.  His left knee crushed the technician’s chest.
    A bullet tore through his right kneecap, spraying blood and bone into the face of the technician.  Keller screamed and fell sideways, tried to face the shooter.  Another bullet shredded his left leg, then another through the back.  He heard a voice; it was more like a hiss though, like a snake.
    “You will die soon enough mortal,” it said.  Terror crawled up his spine; he suddenly didn’t want to see what the voice belonged to.  “Your death will be far worse than the one of this b****, a b**** named Lola I am quite sure.”
    Rage and bloodlust turned his body, he saw a man, with a snake-like head.  It was far more like a skull though.  Clutched in the clawed hands of the monster was Lola’s head.  Blood dripped and tendons dangled under the terrified face of his partner. 
    Keller roared, the lions roar echoing through the halls.  “Your dead, you hear me motherfucker, your gently caressing dead.  YOU WILL DIE YOU wanker!”  His teeth were on fire but he ignored it. 
    The snake thing didn’t smile, its face was stone.  “No mortal, the entire Earth is dead.  I am very… much… alive.” It met Keller’s eyes, and he knew the gently caressing monster was right; he didn’t know how the monster was right.  But it was right; somehow… the Earth was dead.  The confidence and meaning in the monster’s voice was enough to convince Keller.  He hoped though, that the monster was wrong.
    The creature walked down the hallway, away from Keller’s view.  The voice of the technician filtered down the hall.  “This isn’t over motherfucker!” the technician screamed. 
    Keller saw his gun on the ground a few feet away.  He crawled towards it, wincing at every movement.  Picking the gun up, he aimed it at the alarm box, pulled the trigger twice.  The box sparked and hissed electricity, the central computer screen shattered with more sparks.  He jerked away from them.
    Your right you piece of shite, this is far from over! He thought, checking his clip.  He crawled towards the doorway, finally noticing the absence of the blaring alarm.  At least he was awarded with that, the migraine vanishing.


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#17 2009-11-24 18:31:49

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Re: The Demon's Nature

I am sorry my fans, but because of some internal factors, I cannot keep writing The Demon's nature.  I am terribly sorry.  But, who would like to see my final improvements of Ruby Caves, I swear to people annoyed about it that this is the last update for Ruby Caves chapter 1....  It makes a hell of a lot more sense than my previous post.  So, who wants to check it out?


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#18 2010-03-25 19:31:58

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Re: The Demon's Nature

I have a great idea, maybe.... I'm going to write more with this story, based on fan status!  It'll be a while though, I'll start tomorrow.  There will be two or three more parts of this story.


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#19 2010-03-26 04:28:19

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Re: The Demon's Nature

yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! your back
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"Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. That is alchemy's first law of Equivalent Exchange. ...In those days, we really believed that to be the world's one, and only truth...."
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#20 2010-03-26 04:39:02

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Hell yes... with a vengeance!  Now, the second story is still going to be brutal, and maybe even more violent.  There is a torture scene and an extended shoot out.  smile


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#21 2010-03-26 06:23:16

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*smashes though wall* oooyahhhhh!!!!!!
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"Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. That is alchemy's first law of Equivalent Exchange. ...In those days, we really believed that to be the world's one, and only truth...."
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#22 2010-03-27 15:29:35

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Re: The Demon's Nature

more
I want to know what Keller does next, and that creature, where does it go


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#23 2010-03-27 18:52:43

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Okay, I'll write it very soon.  Tonight.


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