ok this one is not on the fly at all guys it took me about half hour to get this one (that sounds a little too long now that i think about it) but here goes
A great debt I owe to you,
But i know not what i can do.
You have filled my hollow heart,
Taking nothing's place, becoming a vital part.
You are always on my mind,
Casting other thoughts behind.
You have healed my broken soul,
Because of you I feel whole.
And yet, there is something that I lack,
And that is a way to pay you back.
I hope you all enjoyed this. this one also is dedicated to my mate. please give me some feedback
I love it! whoever your mate is... they are the luckiest person in the world.
I liked it. Smooth flow overall, and the last two lines hit pretty nicely following the ones before 'em, at least I think anyway. Good job
Excelent work there, dluthchara, excelent work!!!!
thank you Kor *bows*
your poems are very sweet and heartwarming
I normally write what i feel. lol it normally works for me
wow SK should be so happy to get these poems Good Job again Ulfr!