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#1 2010-11-19 15:09:39

Afflicted.Soul
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From: Fayetteville, North Carolina
Registered: 2010-11-18
Posts: 137

Re-birthing

In case your wondering...No I do not believe myself to actually be a werewolf. However, Its appropriate to the theme of this forum. =] (Bear with me, I'm not a poet, And I understand that my method of writing may be confusing.)


Eternally bound, in this flesh I lay dormant.
Your heart gives new meaning, To rage unconstrained.
Your cries are for mercy, an end to this torment.
Your reckless ambition, the cause of my pain.

I hunger for freedom...
Your thirst is for death.

Relinquish your grip, In my soul nothing's left.
The sins of humanity...
Through death we atone.

Her beauty is calling.
She's calling me home.

Now give me my freedom.
Until light of day.

As human we died, And together gained sight.

A victim to rage, in the moon's loving light.


Why didn't you just jump....

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#2 2010-11-23 14:01:56

WolflikeCriminal
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From: Rock Bottom
Registered: 2010-11-18
Posts: 605

Re: Re-birthing

Okay, So I know that you said that you're "not a poet"

What does that even mean? What is a "poet" so be exact? Are any of us poets? I think not.

As for your "method of writing" as you put it, You said it is confusing to the reader.
I beg to differ on this statement also.

I completely understood it, and it wasnt confusing to me at all. I absolutley love this piece. Like alot..

Now was the space between each stanza intetional? Or are you seperating pieces? (Meaning, is this all one piece or are they seperate ones)

Either way I love it/all. lol Amazing job Afflicted. Absolutely ASTONISHING. smile


Tell me im worthless,useless and pathetic. I will believe you. But in the end im the one who succeeds.

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#3 2010-11-23 14:44:08

Afflicted.Soul
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From: Fayetteville, North Carolina
Registered: 2010-11-18
Posts: 137

Re: Re-birthing

Its all one. And my statement was just a statement about not being a poet was just a statement to show humility. But thank you for your support. =]


Why didn't you just jump....

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