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#1 2011-02-22 14:28:22
- thewerepanther
- night crawler of the ice
- From: in and out of the duait
- Registered: 2010-12-31
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dusk acadamy
ok made a new story hope you like the proluge
p.s i know i cant spell deal with it
prologe
he was running, running faster than any mortal should be but zane was no mortal a sharp pain in his back, spine elongating into a tail, mucles expanding, his eyes turing yellow as gold, black fur all running down his body, a scream erupting from his throat before turing into the roar of a panther.
there zane was half human half panther he is a were panther no one could stop him. he roared at the moon,he was invincable
the frozen were froze by me
by basts side i fight set and any demons who opsse us
私の中でパンサー。だけでなく、任意の獣類誇りリーダー
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#2 2011-02-22 15:22:14
- thewerepanther
- night crawler of the ice
- From: in and out of the duait
- Registered: 2010-12-31
- Posts: 399
Re: dusk acadamy
chapter 1
"nice shift zane now you can go back to your dorm"
zane shifted back to human and sprinted past coach zelox a weregazalle. zelox is the sports coach and the shifting teacher. the reason they teach shifting at this school is because its a school where there are only wereanimals and anthros here. this is dusk acadamy!
Shifting was the lesson were you homed in on your transformation powers learned to use your animal sides body to do combat sports and games.
zane got into his dorm and was greeted by his freinds dylan a wereotter a great swimmer and he has black hair and green eyes and an avrege kind of body witch contrasts zane who looked totally goth he had long black hair and ring in one lip and was sporty and very hyper also his eyes were a deep black. his cousin aaron was the same expect aaron had shart blond hair and that was it his eyes were yellow all the time in a canine way because Aaron is a werejackel "zane" aaron said "ive got to tell you something"
"aaron what is it about ... mom?" zane says "zane .... shes fallen into a coma " "no." noooooooooooooo
Last edited by thewerepanther (2011-02-23 05:45:07)
the frozen were froze by me
by basts side i fight set and any demons who opsse us
私の中でパンサー。だけでなく、任意の獣類誇りリーダー
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#3 2011-03-10 22:30:06
- FreeAsMe
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Re: dusk acadamy
I like the idea of a school for weres, I wish I could take an m-shift course. Cool story!!!
any one could trip over something else, but it takes skill to trip over your own feet.
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#4 2011-03-11 13:36:00
- silver shadow
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Re: dusk acadamy
seriously, spelling is okay, but the grammar kept me from understanding anything.
until the day break, and the shadows flee away. Song of Soloman 2:17
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Dont touch the f*@#ing tail!
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#5 2011-03-11 14:07:35
- ShadyHowl
- Token British Wolf
- From: England, United Kingdom
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Re: dusk acadamy
Werepanther, as a courtesy to your readers, please spell and grammar check your stories. I think it's really unfair to just expect people to 'deal with it'.
Disclaimer: I am actually female.
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#6 2011-04-12 23:58:24
- silver shadow
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Re: dusk acadamy
ouch. sorry, werepanther. didn't mean to shoot you down.
until the day break, and the shadows flee away. Song of Soloman 2:17
(Pushes random buttons)
Dont touch the f*@#ing tail!
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