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#51 2011-07-21 08:02:24
- Dira
- Nightwalker werewolf illustrator
- From: SA
- Registered: 2007-10-22
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Re: I'm trying to turn this into a story
I'll get right to it. Hold on ok. 
I do lov how you started to describe the place.
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#52 2011-07-21 14:10:02
- Protoman2050
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- From: Long Beach, CA, USA
- Registered: 2009-12-20
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Re: I'm trying to turn this into a story
Thanks!
Fencing is what happens when you take swashbuckling, which is a method for nobles to create bloodbaths for insignificant insults, and turn it into a game.
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#53 2011-07-21 14:45:51
- Dira
- Nightwalker werewolf illustrator
- From: SA
- Registered: 2007-10-22
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Re: I'm trying to turn this into a story
Yeay! I was absorbed into the fight and now the mother speaking and Doug listening his fear and everything meshed together like a puzzle.
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#54 2011-07-21 15:13:42
- Protoman2050
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- From: Long Beach, CA, USA
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- Posts: 87
Re: I'm trying to turn this into a story
So, I'm, actually able to write well? Poor Doug...how would you describe his character now?
Fencing is what happens when you take swashbuckling, which is a method for nobles to create bloodbaths for insignificant insults, and turn it into a game.
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