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#1 2009-08-02 21:24:40
- Were-Featherdragon
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Hearing your voice
I hear your voice in my head,
wondering what I should do.
I look up to the bright old moon
thinking of you.
I go to read a book
knowing it's your favorite
wishing you would come
to read with me.
I go to bed thinking
what ever will I do
Knowing that you have gone off
to live close to the moon.
I'm the fastest flying feathered winged dragon ever!
( Wow, isn't that a mouth full! XD )
The wolf runs free in the world of utter beauty, and the moon's shadows become part of thee, showing true grace and tranquility
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#2 2009-08-03 11:06:18
- FenrirFinale
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Re: Hearing your voice
What I personally think is the best of the three you've posted so far. Keep writing and get even better Feather. You've got talent. 
Always happy to chat so add me on Kik at ArcticRhapsody.
Seize the Night~
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#3 2009-08-03 14:05:45
- lord_hondros
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- From: Ohio
- Registered: 2009-04-13
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Re: Hearing your voice
This is pretty neat.
Awesome poem!
Hey, this would make a good metalcore song...
Mind if I write some music and record it with my vocals and post it on youtube? All credits to you for the lyrics, of course.
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#4 2009-08-03 19:27:17
- Were-Featherdragon
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Re: Hearing your voice
I' don't mind, actually I'm really happy that u asked me! and thank u!
I'm the fastest flying feathered winged dragon ever!
( Wow, isn't that a mouth full! XD )
The wolf runs free in the world of utter beauty, and the moon's shadows become part of thee, showing true grace and tranquility
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#5 2009-11-08 03:40:16
- jZel_silent
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Re: Hearing your voice
I anticipate that the poem reminds the beauty of the night but it was thinking for shown the vampires related poem at this post.
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