I hear your voice in my head,
wondering what I should do.
I look up to the bright old moon
thinking of you.
I go to read a book
knowing it's your favorite
wishing you would come
to read with me.
I go to bed thinking
what ever will I do
Knowing that you have gone off
to live close to the moon.
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What I personally think is the best of the three you've posted so far. Keep writing and get even better Feather. You've got talent.
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This is pretty neat.
Awesome poem!
Hey, this would make a good metalcore song...
Mind if I write some music and record it with my vocals and post it on youtube? All credits to you for the lyrics, of course.
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I' don't mind, actually I'm really happy that u asked me! and thank u!
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I anticipate that the poem reminds the beauty of the night but it was thinking for shown the vampires related poem at this post.
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