I began working on this tale almost three months ago, and have a completed prologue and opening chapter completed. The story revolves around a cult organization who believe themselves to be werewolves (may or not be in reality) and are enacting a vendetta against human society. It is told from the perspective of a cult member and an undercover detective.
Any feedback and opinions would be fantastic!
Prologue: http://hyper-aggie42.deviantart.com/art … -147810116
CH 1 The Gentleman in Black: http://hyper-aggie42.deviantart.com/art … -154278086
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Wow, that's amazing. I'm going to have to read the rest of this one. I think dA might have messed up your formatting a little bit though, A space left between paragraphs would make it just a tiny bit easier to read, but the story itself is brilliant. I need to read more now...
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Hey Thank You SF! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll also keep in mind the paragraph split.
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Well if anyone is interested here is the second chapter: The Ninth Moon
http://hyper-aggie42.deviantart.com/art … -163548145
Last edited by Vindicator (2010-05-11 02:07:04)
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Here is the next chapter for those interested. "The Double Message."
http://hyper-aggie42.deviantart.com/art … -165430253
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