The Werewolf Café / Greyscale

Vindicator · 2010-02-15 18:39:00

I began working on this tale almost three months ago, and have a completed prologue and opening chapter completed. The story revolves around a cult organization who believe themselves to be werewolves (may or not be in reality) and are enacting a vendetta against human society. It is told from the perspective of a cult member and an undercover detective.

Any feedback and opinions would be fantastic!

Prologue: http://hyper-aggie42.deviantart.com/art … -147810116

CH 1 The Gentleman in Black: http://hyper-aggie42.deviantart.com/art … -154278086

Randomwolf42 · 2010-02-15 18:50:32

Wow, that's amazing. I'm going to have to read the rest of this one. I think dA might have messed up your formatting a little bit though, A space left between paragraphs would make it just a tiny bit easier to read, but the story itself is brilliant. I need to read more now...

Vindicator · 2010-02-15 23:41:17

Hey Thank You SF! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll also keep in mind the paragraph split.

Vindicator · 2010-05-11 02:06:12

Well if anyone is interested here is the second chapter: The Ninth Moon

http://hyper-aggie42.deviantart.com/art … -163548145

Last edited by Vindicator (2010-05-11 02:07:04)

Vindicator · 2010-05-28 00:39:45

Here is the next chapter for those interested. "The Double Message."

http://hyper-aggie42.deviantart.com/art … -165430253

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