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#1 2010-04-16 17:50:39
- FenrirFinale
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Beating Heart
Thump thump, thump thump
My beating heart sets the tone
Thump thump, thump thump
I see you all alone
Thump thump, thump thump
Your heart calls to me
Thump thump, thump thump
Whispers and draws me
Thump thump
Time slows now
Thump thump
I try to reach you
Thump
You leave me when I need you most
Thump
Silence comes
Thump
Now I'm a ghost
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#2 2010-04-16 21:23:36
- wolfblood17
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Re: Beating Heart
Intriguing poem! I like it... "Thump, thump, thump"! Go FenrirFinale!
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#3 2010-04-17 11:21:50
- FenrirFinale
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Re: Beating Heart
Haha thank you. I liked the tone I set for this one. IT was made to go with music and the back ground of a beating heart.
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#4 2010-04-17 12:39:00
- wolfblood17
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Re: Beating Heart
Ahhhh... ok. I'd listen to this song! 
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#5 2010-04-17 13:10:38
- lonewolf13
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Re: Beating Heart
me too
"Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. That is alchemy's first law of Equivalent Exchange. ...In those days, we really believed that to be the world's one, and only truth...."
Alphonse Elric --- Fullmetal Alchemist
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#6 2010-04-17 16:45:28
- FenrirFinale
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Re: Beating Heart
Thanks guys
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#7 2010-04-17 21:33:15
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Re: Beating Heart
cool poem
Lupus
silver bullets dont work... not on me anyway =P ...the other guy however.... *looks at dead body lying on the ground*
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#8 2010-04-18 10:57:32
- FenrirFinale
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Re: Beating Heart
Thank you
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