ok guys, this one is partially on the fly. i have the basic idea and some of the words i want to use. it has a structure already, i am going to give it flesh, and you the readers will give it life with your feedback. please read, enjoy, and tell me what you think.
Seeing you more almost everyday.
Speaking with you is never in the way.
Hearing you puts me in such a good mood.
After the hunt I will offer you my share of food.
After we eat I will offer to share my body heat.
When you are injured I will lick the wound clean.
For you I would just about anything.
But until next time I have one thing to do for now,
And that is to let out a Heartfelt Howl.
This poem is dedicated to Minn Elska, my mate: SilentKiller.
thank you for reading
Last edited by UlfrAndi (2010-10-25 10:32:01)
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Pretty good, man. Pretty dang good!
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thank you.
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like it...
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thank you Lupus
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there we go that last edit should make this better....
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aww it's very good
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thank you.
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wow very romantic good job!
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Nice i like its very Romantic
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