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#1 2010-07-17 12:17:05

UlfrAndi
Spirit Walker
From: Your Darkest Dreams
Registered: 2010-05-26
Posts: 13066

Heartfelt Howl

ok guys, this one is partially on the fly. i have the basic idea and some of the words i want to use. it has a structure already, i am going to give it flesh, and you the readers will give it life with your feedback. please read, enjoy, and tell me what you think. smile


Seeing you more almost everyday.
Speaking with you is never in the way.
Hearing you puts me in such a good mood.
After the hunt I will offer you my share of food.
After we eat I will offer to share my body heat.
When you are injured I will lick the wound clean.
For you I would just about anything.
But until next time I have one thing to do for now,
And that is to let out a Heartfelt Howl.


This poem is dedicated to Minn Elska, my mate: SilentKiller.
thank you for reading smile

Last edited by UlfrAndi (2010-10-25 10:32:01)


And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do

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#2 2010-07-17 17:02:45

Kormiak Rue
Bard of the Forum
From: Warrior's Hold
Registered: 2010-06-19
Posts: 4476

Re: Heartfelt Howl

Pretty good, man.  Pretty dang good!


"Póg mo thóin!"  -Irish "Saying"............
"Molon labe"  -Meaning "Come and get them"  This was the Greek response to the Persians order to surrender their weapons at the Thermopylae pass in 480 B.C.E.................
"Qoud vides fecisse, factum ducas" -Latin, meaning "What you see is done, so consider it done"

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#3 2010-07-17 17:03:55

UlfrAndi
Spirit Walker
From: Your Darkest Dreams
Registered: 2010-05-26
Posts: 13066

Re: Heartfelt Howl

thank you. big_smile


And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do

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#4 2010-07-18 05:15:18

lupusindefined
Dark Shadow
Registered: 2009-11-06
Posts: 2142

Re: Heartfelt Howl

like it...


Lupus

silver bullets dont work... not on me anyway =P ...the other guy however.... *looks at dead body lying on the ground*

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#5 2010-07-18 10:16:44

UlfrAndi
Spirit Walker
From: Your Darkest Dreams
Registered: 2010-05-26
Posts: 13066

Re: Heartfelt Howl

thank you Lupus smile


And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do

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#6 2010-07-21 23:39:50

UlfrAndi
Spirit Walker
From: Your Darkest Dreams
Registered: 2010-05-26
Posts: 13066

Re: Heartfelt Howl

there we go that last edit should make this better....


And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do

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#7 2010-07-30 15:20:37

Snow_Wolfy
Member
Registered: 2010-07-29
Posts: 2170

Re: Heartfelt Howl

aww it's very good


Have no fear, for I am an Intellectual Badass!

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#8 2010-07-30 15:22:49

UlfrAndi
Spirit Walker
From: Your Darkest Dreams
Registered: 2010-05-26
Posts: 13066

Re: Heartfelt Howl

thank you. smile


And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do

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#9 2010-08-27 14:45:17

Mitch01
Rising Angel
From: Bronx, NY
Registered: 2010-08-24
Posts: 1798

Re: Heartfelt Howl

wow very romantic good job!


i wasn't designed to handle the worst and i'm not convinced that loving someone is worth it...

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#10 2010-09-03 16:09:48

chouokami
New member
Registered: 2010-09-01
Posts: 7

Re: Heartfelt Howl

Nice i like its very Romantic smile


Im a freindly MONSTER

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