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#1 2010-07-17 12:17:05
- UlfrAndi
- Spirit Walker
- From: Your Darkest Dreams
- Registered: 2010-05-26
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Heartfelt Howl
ok guys, this one is partially on the fly. i have the basic idea and some of the words i want to use. it has a structure already, i am going to give it flesh, and you the readers will give it life with your feedback. please read, enjoy, and tell me what you think. 
Seeing you more almost everyday.
Speaking with you is never in the way.
Hearing you puts me in such a good mood.
After the hunt I will offer you my share of food.
After we eat I will offer to share my body heat.
When you are injured I will lick the wound clean.
For you I would just about anything.
But until next time I have one thing to do for now,
And that is to let out a Heartfelt Howl.
This poem is dedicated to Minn Elska, my mate: SilentKiller.
thank you for reading
Last edited by UlfrAndi (2010-10-25 10:32:01)
And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do
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#2 2010-07-17 17:02:45
- Kormiak Rue
- Bard of the Forum
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- Registered: 2010-06-19
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Re: Heartfelt Howl
Pretty good, man. Pretty dang good!
"Póg mo thóin!" -Irish "Saying"............
"Molon labe" -Meaning "Come and get them" This was the Greek response to the Persians order to surrender their weapons at the Thermopylae pass in 480 B.C.E.................
"Qoud vides fecisse, factum ducas" -Latin, meaning "What you see is done, so consider it done"
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#3 2010-07-17 17:03:55
- UlfrAndi
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Re: Heartfelt Howl
thank you. 
And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do
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#4 2010-07-18 05:15:18
- lupusindefined
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- Registered: 2009-11-06
- Posts: 2142
Re: Heartfelt Howl
like it...
Lupus
silver bullets dont work... not on me anyway =P ...the other guy however.... *looks at dead body lying on the ground*
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#5 2010-07-18 10:16:44
- UlfrAndi
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Re: Heartfelt Howl
thank you Lupus
And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do
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#6 2010-07-21 23:39:50
- UlfrAndi
- Spirit Walker
- From: Your Darkest Dreams
- Registered: 2010-05-26
- Posts: 13066
Re: Heartfelt Howl
there we go that last edit should make this better....
And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do
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#7 2010-07-30 15:20:37
- Snow_Wolfy
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Re: Heartfelt Howl
aww it's very good
Have no fear, for I am an Intellectual Badass!
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#8 2010-07-30 15:22:49
- UlfrAndi
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- From: Your Darkest Dreams
- Registered: 2010-05-26
- Posts: 13066
Re: Heartfelt Howl
thank you.
And if strength is born from heartbreak,
Then mountains I could move.
And if walls could speak,
I pray that they would tell me what to do
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#9 2010-08-27 14:45:17
- Mitch01
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- From: Bronx, NY
- Registered: 2010-08-24
- Posts: 1798
Re: Heartfelt Howl
wow very romantic good job!
i wasn't designed to handle the worst and i'm not convinced that loving someone is worth it...
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#10 2010-09-03 16:09:48
- chouokami
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- Registered: 2010-09-01
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Re: Heartfelt Howl
Nice i like its very Romantic
Im a freindly MONSTER
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