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#1 2010-11-22 14:18:39

WolflikeCriminal
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From: Rock Bottom
Registered: 2010-11-18
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Memories

Here.... I don't really remember writing this... But when I read it, I know that it is about one specific person. >.> He is no longer in my life and this Poem, Is not a good one in my eyes... But here it is anyway...


The halls that I walk cover memories of you
Pain in my chest defines nothing new.
The knowledge of you not being here,
Challenge my mind and totally unclear.
I know you’re still out there truly hidden,
Our love is undying yet completely forbidden.


Tell me im worthless,useless and pathetic. I will believe you. But in the end im the one who succeeds.

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#2 2010-11-22 14:20:27

FenrirFinale
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Re: Memories

It's quite heartfelt smile


Always happy to chat so add me on Kik at ArcticRhapsody.

Seize the Night~

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#3 2010-11-22 14:22:46

WolflikeCriminal
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Posts: 605

Re: Memories

Thanks hmm


Tell me im worthless,useless and pathetic. I will believe you. But in the end im the one who succeeds.

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#4 2010-11-22 14:24:04

FenrirFinale
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Re: Memories

even if a poem doesn't have a nice overtone if it holds emotion well then I have no complaints.


Always happy to chat so add me on Kik at ArcticRhapsody.

Seize the Night~

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#5 2010-11-22 20:08:14

Afflicted.Soul
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From: Fayetteville, North Carolina
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Posts: 137

Re: Memories

You took the words right out of my mouth. Nicely written.


Why didn't you just jump....

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