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#1 2008-10-04 13:30:21

punxnotdead
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I Befriended a Werewolf

I befriended a werewolf
Rachel Plumb

I befriended a werewolf,
He told me his secret,
Of the full harvest moon.
So delicate were his eyes,
I could only smile in surprise.
Honey liquid beneath soft brows,
Furrowed in perplexity – or something else!
So indecipherable!
Like the deep abyss of my churning mind.

Should I fear?
No.
“Fear the beast!”
My body pleads,
“For he will rip out your heart
And eat your flesh!”
No, because I befriended a werewolf tonight.
So passive was his demeanour.
Surely he could no be a killer!

I console him with a shaky hand
A smile plays across his lips.
His teeth!
They were fangs!
Gleaming were they,
Under the full harvest moon.
Chalky was his face as his contours warp
Into a rippling god of beauty!
Chalky was his fur under the full harvest moon,
Glowing were his two yellow eyes,
Sharp were his teeth,
And hot was his breath
As his fangs plunged into my heart!
Should I feel sad?
No.
Because I befriended a werewolf tonight.


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#2 2008-10-04 17:47:40

FenrirFinale
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Re: I Befriended a Werewolf

Dang that was great!!!!!!

Punx that  was so cool! I felt like I was the speaker! ( Which is kinda odd since I'm a guy )  Besides the one grammar error it was wonderful! Write more soon!


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#3 2008-10-05 01:22:23

punxnotdead
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Re: I Befriended a Werewolf

Thank you guys very much. *grumbles* I intended on saying 'eat', but I only had 5 minutes to write it before I went to work.
I came up with the idea last night at 3am in the morning.
And this is my second poem that I've done. I'm actually quite proud of myself.
big_smile


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#4 2008-10-06 14:42:55

punxnotdead
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Re: I Befriended a Werewolf

***** wrote:

*grins* You should write poetry more often!

Oh and did you post the first poetry piece in the Cafe...?

...I can't find it...hmm

Here it is: (It's horrible, I know!)
http://forum.werewolfcafe.com/viewtopic.php?id=3476


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#5 2008-10-06 20:35:42

punxnotdead
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Re: I Befriended a Werewolf

Thanks smile


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#6 2011-12-30 21:45:45

Madiwolf12
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Re: I Befriended a Werewolf

That was awesome you were so descriptive and I could really imagine
Him big_smile

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