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#1 2013-07-12 21:56:31

FenrirFinale
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From: N.C. Look me up
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Flesh to Fur

Black claws knead the earth

Tearing sod and turf

And teeth flash slashing through blood and bone

A warm gush of red spills over a panting tongue

Tasting of milk and honey

And in a flash of light and sound I hear the call

The call of the wild echoing in a howl off the hills

Reaching beyond our withered sky to the moon above

Glistening and shimmering against a black velvet night

As the sounds of her children playing below rise on the wind

Our dear Mother smiles as she hears our song

And draws us to her warm embrace

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Back after years and what's the first thing I feel I need to do? Post a random bit of poetry/prose. Yup the Cafe still makes me feel the exact same way it used too in the old days


Always happy to chat so add me on Kik at ArcticRhapsody.

Seize the Night~

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#2 2013-07-12 22:19:03

Lone Wolf 6
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From: IronCity, Georgia
Registered: 2013-05-08
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Re: Flesh to Fur

Nice


The path of the wolf is the only path I follow .
forever loyal ,for ever family ,forever protect

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#3 2013-07-12 23:08:29

FenrirFinale
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Posts: 12222

Re: Flesh to Fur

Thank you smile


Always happy to chat so add me on Kik at ArcticRhapsody.

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#4 2013-07-13 14:10:34

Lone Wolf 6
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Re: Flesh to Fur

you did a great job on your use of imagery,and adding the sinces  and personification made it that much better . I think you did a great job.


The path of the wolf is the only path I follow .
forever loyal ,for ever family ,forever protect

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