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#76 2009-02-09 19:00:33

Greaver
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Re: Brother Wolf

Guys I'm so sorry for all these delays, I've got a large amount of writers block (I know where to go in the story, just not how to get there), anyways heres the latest post.     



      Josh walked into the house, he was wearing a dirty and slightly torn Insane Clown Posse shirt (“Broke a bone at that show” was his proud description of the experience at the concert where he bought the shirt “I ran up to steal some faygo and security decked me”), and boxers. He walked into his room to see two shapes moving under the covers. He flicked on the light
     “Alice out, its past Thomas’ bedtime” Josh said with a sly grin. Alice kissed Thomas on the cheek and whispered something in his ear before running off. Josh pounce on Thomas “What were you doing you naughty boy?” he said nipping Thomas playfully. Thomas playfully shoved him off and whacked his nose.
     “Bad dog” Thomas shouted between fits of giggling. Josh quickly rebounded, shifted to wolf form and jumped back on Thomas again and started licking him until Thomas’ entire face was wet. Josh then laid on Thomas’ chest and went to sleep.
Thomas sighed and grabbed his sketch pad, this time he drew him and Alice running together through a field, holding hands beneath a beautiful full moon.

Last edited by Greaver (2009-02-09 19:02:09)

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#77 2009-02-09 19:28:18

Iceis The Husky
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Re: Brother Wolf

Awww, how romantic smile.
Short, but sweet, piece you posted, and it was enjoyable, to say the least.
Can't wait for more! bravo!


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#78 2009-02-09 21:36:39

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Re: Brother Wolf

yay!!!you posted more!!


"In the time it took for you to walk down one little hallway,I went to London,got my head blown off,and came back."-Schrodinger-Hellsing "Now lets go die like mangy dogs!"-bernadotte-hellsing "Please Mr. Bernadette,do not smoke inside me."-Seras-hellsing

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#79 2009-02-10 23:57:20

Goldie
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Re: Brother Wolf

oh please post some more. big_smile


how can never ever be ever if never ever was ever, ever?
yes, i said that, but what do i mean, I'm what was that, thats crazy, crazy go nuts, nutty nuts. ok i guess I'm done, but it will never be over, now will it????????

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#80 2009-02-11 17:00:16

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Re: Brother Wolf

sick dude were you been havnt tlked to you in a long ass time


And if you think you hot then obviously you were lied to
And we don’t die we multiply and then we come divide you
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#81 2009-02-11 17:39:14

Grayle
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Re: Brother Wolf

Well... it appears as though Thomas has found a remedy for his despair - and although no medical prescription is involved, playing doctor apparently is....

  I can't believe I just wrote that.

  I appreciated how Josh was very accepting and not the least bit judgmental. In fact, he seemed to be completely happy for his brother. It will be interesting to see where you take the story from here.

   Keep it coming!


To thy known wolf be true...


"Yay! We're Doomed!"  -- Gir

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#82 2009-02-11 19:21:10

Greaver
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Re: Brother Wolf

*falls on the floor at Grayle's joke* they didn't go that far, just a teen make out session (which even i've been involved in O.o)

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#83 2009-02-16 12:36:07

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Re: Brother Wolf

Golly, sorry I missed the last update.  I liked it.  The brothers seem to be getting along nicely.  smile


A harmonic sound such as a vibrating string is one in where the harmonics are mathematically related by what is called the harmonic series.
I wanna win your heart and take you to another place you never thought or could dream of.  -- The Halo Friendlies

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#84 2009-02-26 19:16:01

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Re: Brother Wolf

Alice dodged Josh’s pounce towards her, it was early t5he next morning, about 6:30 AM, a few lingering crickets sang their song as Alice and Josh wrestled playfully in wolf form. Josh hit the ground hard as Alice sat atop him grinning; he quickly wiggled out and reversed the pin. He sat on her wagging his tail and grinning slyly. Suddenly Alice switched to human form and threw Josh off. She ran over to Thomas and gave him a huge hug and a kiss.

    Alice held Thomas’ hand tightly as they walked through the forest to a small stream; Alice rushed forward and dove in headfirst, she then grabbed Thomas’ arm and pulled him, fully clothed, into the lake. He laughed and she kissed him “So how long are you gonna be here Tom?”
    “That depends” he said
    “On what”
    “How long you’re staying.”

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#85 2009-02-26 19:38:16

Grayle
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Re: Brother Wolf

Very nice depiction of universal acceptance. Indeed, this is just the type of atmosphere that Thomas needed in order to recuperate from his brooding. And the lake scene was pretty cuet as well!

Nice addition, Greaver!


To thy known wolf be true...


"Yay! We're Doomed!"  -- Gir

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#86 2009-02-28 00:03:39

Iceis The Husky
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Re: Brother Wolf

Again,  how romantic. smile

Dude, keep up this good, addicting substance we like to call writing and reading. I love it.


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#87 2009-02-28 00:31:34

wolfsongx
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Re: Brother Wolf

I like it!  I feel happy and playful reading that.  smile


A harmonic sound such as a vibrating string is one in where the harmonics are mathematically related by what is called the harmonic series.
I wanna win your heart and take you to another place you never thought or could dream of.  -- The Halo Friendlies

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#88 2013-04-25 14:28:22

Greaver
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Re: Brother Wolf

Wow, been exactly 5 years and one day since I joined and over four years since my last post. And I still don't want to get rid of this idea, though I realize it needs a TON of revision and change

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#89 2013-04-25 16:42:58

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Re: Brother Wolf

Hello!  Happy five year anniversary!

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#90 2014-09-16 21:31:21

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Re: Brother Wolf

One of my ancestors was a greaver; although he spelled it greaves.


the texas octogenerian
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#91 2014-09-26 00:18:13

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Re: Brother Wolf

I know it's been over a year since you last posted anything, but if you'd like to kick around a few ideas to help get the creative juices flowing again I'd be glad to help.  Just let me know.

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#92 2015-04-23 02:44:42

Greaver
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Re: Brother Wolf

I'd actually love to big_smile

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#93 2015-04-23 03:00:13

Greaver
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Re: Brother Wolf

Though honestly I wanna reboot the whole idea c:

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#94 2015-04-29 04:15:39

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Re: Brother Wolf

Great story. You have done well. Thanks for sharing.

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#95 2016-01-11 03:23:47

Amos33
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Re: Brother Wolf

I like this, I wish  you'd do what punx does and make your chapters longer.

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